The Oncoming Storm Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 YU-GI-OH: SHROUD OF DESTINY-CHAPTER ONE: THE DUEL OF DESTINY Jaden Yuki lay wide awake in his bed in the Slifer Red Dorm on the Duel Academy island. There was a reason he was still awake. He was on the verge of early gradution from the Duel Academy. He had been informed so by Maximillian Pegasus himelf. You see, around three weeks ago, Maximillian Pegasus had confirmed the rumors that he'd come out of retirement by showing up at the Duel Academy one day, along with another guest, Soloman Moto, the grandfather of legendary duelist Yugi Moto, and, according to Pegasus, he was also an induvidual duelist scout. He said that Mr. Moto would observe the students of the Duel Academy for three weeks, and the best duelists he saw would graduate and be allowed to enter in a tournament orchestrated nd funded by both KaibaCorp and Industrial Illusions: The Kasier Coliseum tournament, the first tournament to be held in a virtual world. The virtual world: Kaiser Island, a Virtual world created by Seto Kaiba himself, and using the Virtual reality machines to access it. Over the past three weeks, only a handful of duelists had pleasd Mr Moto, and he, Jaden Yuki, was one of them. The others were Syrus Truesdale, Bastion Misawa, Chazz Princeton, Alexis Rhodes, Jim Cook, and Tyranno Hassleberry. And if that weren't any better, Seto Kaiba, Aster Phoenix, and Jesse Anderson would be guests of honor. There were also rumors that Zane Truesdale, Syrus's older brother who had graduated from the Duel Academy only one year before, would be coming to watch. He knew he would be dueling someone tomorrow; Mr. Moto had told him he would, but it would be a mystery. He picked up his dueling deck, one that almost never let him down, and looked through it one last time. He came upon his Winged Kuriboh card. "Hey, Kuriboh!" Jaden told his card quietly. It replied with a warble. "Wish me luck, ok?" It winked and warbled again. He set his deck down and finally went to sleep. The next day, Jaden awoke bright and early, and reported to the main dueling arena. He found Mr. Moto and Mr. Pegasus standing by the entrance door. "Ah, Jaden, up bright and early, i see?" Mr. Moto asked as Jaden approached the door. "Yeah, i'm ready to get my game on!" replied Jaden eagerly. "So let me through." "Actually, you won't be entering through here. Follow the signs down that hallway and you'll prepare in one of the chambers at the far end of the dueling arena." Pegasus explained. "Alright! Thanks!" said Jaden, and he ran down the hall. While he was walking down the hall, he heard someone shout hi name behind him. Jaden whirled around, and saw Jesse Anderson coming down the hallway towards him. "Hey Jesse!" called Jaden. "Hi Jaden." he replied. "I just wanted to say good luck for your duel. I'm lendong you some of my cards that could help you in your duel." And he handed Jaden some cards. Jaden looking through them, in awe. "Whoa! Your lending me all your Crystal Beast cards, and your Rainbow Dragon?" "Yeah, well, i owe you one for saving me from that Yubel thing. Good luck!" Jesse told him, and he left. 30 minutes later, while he was in the side chamber preparing, he heard Dr. Crowler announce to the many spectators the following anecdote: "Welcome, students and esteemed guests, to the first graduation match of 5! Now may i present......Mr. Maximillian Pegasus!" He heard Pegasus's voice say to the crowd,"Hello, one and all, to the first of 5 graduation matches, organized by myself and Mr. Soloman Moto!" He paused to let the spectators applause, and boy, was it loud! "Our first duel will be Jaden Yuki of the Slifer Red Dorm versus a mystery duelist chosen by both myself and Soloman Moto. Will Jaden please report to the dueling arena?" That was his cue. Jaden strapped on his duel disk, inserted his deck into the deck slot, and ran into the arena. The applause was deafening. He saw his friends Syrus, Bastion, Alexis, Jim, and Hasslebery cheering him on in one of the middle sections of the bleachers. Up in one of the high catwalk areas was indeed Zane Truesdale, still wearing his Obelisk Blue jacket. On the other side, sitting in the guest of honor box was Seto Kaiba, Aster Phoenix, and Jesse Anderson. In the chair next to Jesse was Mr. Moto, and next to him was an empty chair which Jaden supposed belonged to Mr. Pegasus. "And will our mystery duelist please enter the arena?" Pegasus shouted over the crowd. From the other side chamber at the other end of the field, the door opened, and the duelist Jaden would face came out. Jaden's jaw dropped. His opponent was Yugi Moto, the king of games. "You're Jaden Yuki, i presume?" the legendary duelist asked Jaden. "Y..Yeah." he stammered. "Let the match....begin!" shouted Pegasus. "All right, Jaden! It's time to duel!" Yugi shouted. "You bet! Get your game on!" Jaden yelled back TO BE CONTINUED............. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 bad. i knew right from the start he would be facing yugi and too be honest, if u make Jaden win or make it a draw, this fanfic will get no attention. its got good potential but like i said, make his 1st opponent someone else, not yugi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 ya, same thing, or make it like, that thing that was as kaiba in epi 12 or so in YGO!, so at teh end of the next chapter, its liek.....OMG ITS NOT YUGI Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jhcman21 Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 nice, but you should at least put some dueling action in it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elonkudden Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Why make a fanfic with existing heroes? Why not make your own? But I'm excited about how the duel will eend thou. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Oncoming Storm Posted February 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 i'm working on the second part of this. also, the reason why i didn't want to make my own is because i'm new at this fan fic thing, and i haven't been able to think of new characters. to see moer shroud of destiny, look for the prologue and the introduction Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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