Sailor Gourmet Posted June 5, 2011 Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 [b][center][font="Times New Roman"]Well, I was digging through my created cards and found something I made a while ago that I started, but didn't quite finish. I fixed it up a bit, and finally decided to showcase it! From the old tale of [i]Ali Baba and the Forty Thieves[/i], it's, well, Ali Baba! *Edit* Added Abdul-Muquaddim, not necessarily from Arabian Nights, but he fit the genre! [img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/1943/13444.jpg[/img] [img]http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/9256/13444a.jpg[/img] Errata(Ali Baba): When this card is Normal Summoned successfully, change it to Defense Position and destroy all face-up Defense Position Monsters on the field. As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, effects of Defense Position monsters are negated (except this card). When a card is changed from Attack Position to Defense Position, any player may pay 1000 Life Points to destroy that card. Errata (Abdul-Muquaddim): This card cannot be Special Summoned. When you Normal Summon this card, its Tribute must be FIRE. When this card is Normal Summoned successfully, you may change the Battle Position of 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. As long as this card remains face up on the field, Set monsters are immediately flipped face up, and their effects are negated. Comment, rate, and suggest fixes! I welcome them! I might make more in the future, so keep a lookout! I'm a bit dusty on the whole grammar thing (not to say I didn't take a look at the rules first- I'm not ignorant), so please forgive me.[/font][/center] [/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EndlessOcean Posted June 5, 2011 Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 It destroys itself when its summoned. [i]change it to Defense Position and destroy all face-up Defense Position Monsters on the field[/i] See? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sailor Gourmet Posted June 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 Well, I feel like an idiot. >-< *Fixed* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sailor Gourmet Posted June 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 5, 2011 Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 I don't see why you made it 1500 LP pay seems a bit expensive to me, maybe change it to 1000 instead? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sailor Gourmet Posted June 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 I was kind of guessing for that LP amount, and I'm glad to see that I was close. I'll add that in. *Edited* Anything else? I may work this into a set... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 5, 2011 Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 better for the tune down, now I can give it a rate of 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sailor Gourmet Posted June 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 Thanks! *EDIT* Added Abdul Muquaddim, Arabian Trekker! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowserpent Posted June 5, 2011 Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 The two cards really work well together. It seems balanced I could be wrong though ... 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 5, 2011 Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 Trekker is basically like a monster form of Light of Intervention, I don't consider that too creative in that.......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sailor Gourmet Posted June 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 I wasn't really aware of that. It seemed like a good idea, and the effect fit the genre that I was going for. Sorry for it. I'm in the process of making more, so I'll keep that in mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sailor Gourmet Posted June 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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