Yankee Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Well, here it is, I really tried my best on the grammar. Pleas help me on the grammar/ocg on this please. Thanks ^_^BTW, I know I did a bad job on the holoing and/or the Attribute thing, sorry =/ When this card destroyes an opponent's monster by battle, this cards Attribute is treated as the destroyed cards Attribute. This card gains the following effect depending on it's Attribute: FIRE: When this card inflicts damage to your opponent's Life Points, decrease your opponent's Life Points by 500. WATER: When an opponent's monster inflicts damage to your Life Points, increase your Life Poins by 500. EARTH: This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card destroyes an opponent's monster by battle, halve the damage. WIND: When this card is destroyed by an opponent's card effect, decrease your opponent's Life Points by 500. LIGHT: When this card attacks a face-down monster, destroy it immidiatly with this card effect without applying Damage Calculation. DARK: Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you may discard 1 card from your hand to destroy 1 card on your opponent's side of the field. If you do, this card cannot attack this turn. Thanks for looking ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 It should have an attribute to begin with but than he woudn't have an effect for that attribute +2 attrbutes more with out an effect and the text would be smaller. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
achoi2 Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 lol I thought about that too, a normal card should have an attribute, lol :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elonkudden Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Give it Divine, maybe? The out-coloured attribute circle is easy too see, and thereof a pretty bad fake. 6 of 10 for the effort and time needed to collect that cool picture and write the text! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Nice idea yankee, good effort ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Ingo Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Cool card.. And very long effect :D 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dongaboy Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 ohhh me like9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 That's a nice card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:/Jishin//Enigma/:. Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 the micro effect lames it out but cool 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Thanks for the rates guys ^_^I really tried. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonisanoob Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 its a great idea but tbh i think its UNDERPOWERED =O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 Please do explain how it's underpowerd. I wanna know how to fix these things so they don't happen in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
achoi2 Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 good luck on more designs. Keep up the work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barsam Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 Its a nice card!Good Job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RiffMaster Alex Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 very good! It's a bit obvious that there used to be an attribute there because of the orange circle, and there shouldn't be an "E" at the end of destroys. 9/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(!Death!Reborn!) Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 Like the effect,great work ther yankee 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 Thanks alot. I know, I said I didn't do good on the Attribute thing, but thanks, i'll work on that. I am glad you all like it ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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