♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted June 6, 2011 Report Share Posted June 6, 2011 [center] [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/1hazax.jpg[/IMG] [i]1 Tuner + 2 or more Fairy-Type monsters When this card is Synchro Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 Banished Fairy-Type monster. Once per turn, you can negate the activation of a Spell, Trap, or Monster Card effect and destroy it. During your opponent's Main Phase 1, if a monster is Special Summoned, you can send 1 Fairy-Type monster in your hand to the Graveyard to negate that Summon and destroy that monster. When this card is destroyed, return 1 Fairy-Type monster in your Graveyard to the top of your Deck.[/i][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted June 6, 2011 Report Share Posted June 6, 2011 1 Fairy-Type Tuner + 2 or more Fairy-Type monsters (just a suggestion .....) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Mehmani Posted June 6, 2011 Report Share Posted June 6, 2011 Wording/Grammar = 7/10 Creativity = 14/20 Balance = 15/30 Viability = 20/40 56% = D+ [<Check my signature for the complete list of grades and grade margins, if you wish.>] I can't fault the wording and grammar much at all, apart from the fact that you misspelt "Fairy" once in the effect, used "add to the top of your Deck" instead of "return" and that you had this phrase in the effect: "Once per turn, you can negate the activation of a Spell, Trap, or Monster Card effect" - you don't specify what happens after the activation is negated; you should specify whether it returns to its original position, it is destroyed or banished (on the topic of banishing, I'm not sure about the capitalization of it). It is a pretty creative boss monster, I must admit, despite that fact that pretty much none of its effects are new or original. It is more the combination of them in a single card that interests me. It is a very, very powerful card, but I can't see much use for it - the requirements are not that difficult to meet, but doesn't fit the kind of theme that Fairy decks tend to have. It is going to be tough getting this out with Kristya and it doesn't fit into Hyperion or Agents. This in turn hurts its viability. Could be a lot better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 6, 2011 Report Share Posted June 6, 2011 as always, you get 10/10 for the art "During your opponent's Main Phase 1, if a monster is Special Summoned, you can send 1 Fairy-Type monster in your hand to the Graveyard to negate that Summon and destroy that monster." Is that to be limited to once per turn as well? Granted you probably won't get the chance to do it more than twice anyway, but still 9.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted June 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 Thanks guys for the comments! I was trying to make it good for both Agents and Heralds but I guess I need to work on that, thanks Mikhail. I edited the errors also. @ Ragnarok: Nope! It's like Dark Armed Dragon. Use it as many times as you need. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGreatMachine Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 I can see this as an anime character's greatest card. despite being 'generic' the card is still pretty awesome in a fairy deck. 9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 [quote name='♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥' timestamp='1307466435' post='5263810'] Thanks guys for the comments! I was trying to make it good for both Agents and Heralds but I guess I need to work on that, thanks Mikhail. I edited the errors also. @ Ragnarok: Nope! It's like Dark Armed Dragon. Use it as many times as you need. [/quote] All right, you sure that won't make it OPed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 8, 2011 Report Share Posted June 8, 2011 So with the last effect, you can add this card with his effect itself to Extra Deck, right? "Once per turn, you can negate the activation of a Spell, Trap, or Monster Card effect and destroy it." --> remove this effect, because it is too powerful with that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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