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If you think you've seen this set before, you might have. Two years ago I had a different account on here, but I lost my password. This was one of my favorite sets that I made and so I did some digging and found it so now I'm reposting it. I'm thinking about adding more cards to is and I should remake some cards with updated OCG and fix some of the mistakes. But for now I want to share the cards so here they are.

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Elder Sage: When you Special Summon a "Night Warrior" monster you may activate this effect. Your opponent searches their deck and selects 1 monster card. Flip a coin, if head you Special Summon that monster to your side of the field, ignoring summoning conditions. If tails your opponent Special Summons that monster to their side of the field ignoring summoning conditions.
Stealth Slicer: If this card was Normal Summoned negate its effect. Once per turn you can Tribute 1 monster you control to change the battle position of 1 monster your opponent controls. If all monsters your opponent controls are in Defense position, this card can attack your opponent directly.
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Chain Tamer Effect: If this card is Normal Summoned negate its effect. Select 1 monster your opponent controls and change its Battle Position. This monster cannot attack the selected monster. As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field the selected monster cannot change its Battle Positon, attack, or be destroyed in battle. Only 1 monster can be selected with the effect at a time.

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand during your opponent's Battle Phase when 3 "Night Warrior" monsters are destroyed by battle. When this card is Special Summoned your opponent selects 1 monster they control. Destroy all monster on the feild except this monster and the 1 your opponent selected.

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can be Special Summoned from your hand by removing 3 "Night Warrior" monster in your Graveyard from play. Once per turn, during your Main Phase Tribute 1 "Night Warrior" monster you control increase this card's ATK by 1000 until the End Phase. When this card is destroyed, Special Summon 1 "Night Warrior" monster removed from play for the Summon of this card.

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Whenever a "Night Warrior" monster is destroyed by battle this card gains 1 Moon Counter. During your Main Phase 1 remove 2 Moon Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower "Night Warrior" Monster from your hand or remove 4 Night Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 level 5 or higher "Night Warrior" monster from your hand. This effect can only be activated once per turn. If this card would be destroyed, remove all Moon Counters from it insted.

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very impressive pics you've got there

can you write out the lore for Elder Sage and Stealth Slicer?

for twin blade, for the multi attacks and having 2300 atk, you should say it can't attack directly

Soul Master I would say the special summoned monster has its effects negated during that turn

9/10
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[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1307429927' post='5263076']
very impressive pics you've got there

can you write out the lore for Elder Sage and Stealth Slicer?

for twin blade, for the multi attacks and having 2300 atk, you should say it can't attack directly

Soul Master I would say the special summoned monster has its effects negated during that turn

9/10
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ragnarok! I remember you, you used to comment on all my cards... I think you commented on this set the first time it was up.

Anyway, yeah I'll write out the lore for Elder Sage and Stealth Slicer and I'll fix Twin Blade's effect up.
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[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1307594889' post='5268684']
yeah sorry I was gone a long time, you don't need to ask why

I don't remember you though.........

you going to update this set in adding more cards?
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About 2 years ago I was on as a different name, but I lost my password so I made a new account.

I'll probably add more cards. I plan on it at least.
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Overall it looks pretty neat, but as tired as I am I didn't really look over it all that well... I did notice a few ocg errors and things I didn't like, tomorrow (when I wake up... later today) I will re-read this and be a little more thorough on my response.
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First off, lets look at the pictures...
I like most of the pictures you chose for the cards individually, but as a set I think there are too many styles of artwork in there, it would be cool if you could find similar looking styles to replace some of the pics.
"Bite of the White Fang" and "Stealth Spy" both have slightly fuzzy/blurry pictures.
"Underdog Victory", "Back Up Plan" and "Night Warrior Moon Ray" all have signatures or small writing in bottom corners.
"Night Warrior Chain Tamer" has no background.. just a white box.


"Night Warrior Earth Crusher" you need to capitalize each time you say any type of summon, you missed the second "Special Summon" in there.
"Night Warrior Mist Heart", I'm not sure if this matters... but I think on its last effect it can all be in the same sentence, just with a comma.
Not sure if you meant to do this, but on "Night Warrior Sky Hunter" it does not say monster(s) like previous cards.
"Night Warrior Blazing Soul", "special" is not capitalized.
"Night Warrior Chain Tamer", I'm not sure, but I think you should specify when you can use his effect. Is it when he is Summoned, Once per turn, Once per opponents turn, One time only?
"Night Warrior Elder Sage", "head" needs to be heads.
"Night Warrior Soul Master", where do you Special Summon the monster from? Your hand, your deck, the Grave..?
"Night Warrior the Survivor", this effect needs to be "you can Special Summon it"
"Night Warrior Hate Bringer", "by removing 3 "Night Warrior" monster[b]s[/b]"... "your Main Phase [b]you can [/b]Tribute 1 "Night Warrior" monster"... "Special Summon 1 "Night Warrior" monster[b] that was [/b]removed from play for the Summon of this card."

"Ninja Bombing", "upto" needs a space in between it, and "where" needs to be were.
"Bite of the White Fang", you were making this one quick or something, you misspelled field, controlled (twice), and loses.

Well... im gettin bored of this, so I'll stop there. Overall the cards are pretty good, but I think some of their effects are UP, such as the effects of Moon Ray, Earth Crusher and Elder Sage (effect is fine on him, but his stats could use a boost)

Anyways, keep tweaking the effects, looking over your cards for small errors/changes, adding cards and possibly looking for new pictures, cause these are cool!
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