This Account is Unplayable Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 [center][img]http://i1105.photobucket.com/albums/h359/HoundsOfAnubis/Cards/ChaosbreakerIdia3.png[/img] Lore: [i]"This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard. When this card declares an attack, you can send the top card of your deck to the Graveyard. If the sent card is a monster; If the Attribute of the sent monster is the same as the attack target’s: Destroy the attack target immediately, with this card’s effect. If this card was Special Summoned, it gains the following effect: o When this card is selected as an attack target, you can discard 1 card from your hand: Negate the attack."[/i] Trying to see if I can make sense of Konami's colons and semi-colons... I highly doubt I managed it... I should've probably stuck to the old OCG for this one...[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 change only 1 thing "When this card is selected as an attack target, you can discard 1 card from your hand: Negate the attack." Don't make that more than once per turn yes most of the time you'll only have 1-3 cards in your hand anyway, but still 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This Account is Unplayable Posted June 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 I understand your point, and actually realised a mistake on my part. I was going to mention how it couldn't be Special Summoned from the Graveyard... but completely forgot to include it... changing that now. Also, would that balance that effect enough? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 it should be fine once you do that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 8, 2011 Report Share Posted June 8, 2011 "This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard. When this card declares an attack, you can send the top card of your [b]D[/b]eck to the Graveyard. If the sent card is a Monster Card; If the Attribute of the sent monster is the same as the attack target: Destroy the attack target immediately, with this card’s effect. If this card was Special Summoned, it gains the following effect: o When this card is selected as an attack target, you can discard 1 card from your hand: Negate the attack." I rather seems unfamiliar with your style of OCG, but whatever. Reduce the DEF IMO, other than is fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This Account is Unplayable Posted June 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2011 The style of OCG is based off of Konami's new idea of using colons and semi-colons. Since I haven't really looked into it much (I realise I should've) their use on this card may not be entirely correct by Konami's standards. Thanks for the slight OCG correction regardless. x3 Also, what would I lower the DEF too, exactly? It's not like anything really uses its DEF anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 8, 2011 Report Share Posted June 8, 2011 For balanced, 2800/2800 --> 2800/2000 seems balanced to me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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