Warriors of Misery set completed.

[Alice Moonflowyr]

Warriors of Misery. The completed set. Rate please. Enjoy! =) [spoiler=Monsters][img]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/9935/203822f.jpg[/img][img]http://img848.imageshack.us/img848/783/203822a.jpg[/img][img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img545.imageshack.us/img545/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/5755/203822e.jpg[/img][img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img857.imageshack.us/img857/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img805.imageshack.us/img805/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/1046/203822d.jpg[/img][img]http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/9500/203822rw.jpg[/img][img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/3616/203822j.jpg[/img][img]http://img805.imageshack.us/img805/9839/203822o.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells][img]http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img808.imageshack.us/img808/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img688.imageshack.us/img688/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/6759/203822i.jpg[/img][img]http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/3770/203822l.jpg[/img][img]http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/9646/203822q.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Traps][img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img804.imageshack.us/img804/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/9935/203822f.jpg[/img][img]http://img857.imageshack.us/img857/9075/203822z.jpg[/img][img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/650/203822ev.jpg[/img][img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/7909/203822y.jpg[/img][img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/9935/203822f.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=UberMonsters][img]http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/3770/203822l.jpg[/img][img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img863.imageshack.us/img863/4110/203822.jpg[/img][img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/4110/203822.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Sword of Sadness Lore]Equip only to a monster with 'Misery' in its name. That monster gains 700 ATK. When the equipped monster battles, the opponents monster loses 400 ATK during the Damage Phase only. Once per Duel, if the equipped monster would be destroyed by battle, negate the attack, change the attacking monster to Defense Position, and place one Misery Counter on all of your opponents monsters that dont have a Misery Counter.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Horlaten, King of Misery Lore]"Misery Tuner"+ 1 "Misery" non-tuner monster. This card cannot be Summoned exept by Sychro Summon. When this card is Syncro Summoned, select one monster on the field. That monster loses 700 ATK and 500 DEF. When this card is Sychro Summoned, place one Misery Counter on all of your opponents monsters that dont have a Misery Counter. All "Misery" monsters you control gain 1000 ATK.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Zulaphel, Misery Incarnate Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Unnatural Presence". When this card is Special Summoned, destroy all of your opponents monsters with Misery Counters on them. Every time this monster deals damage to your opponent, he/she discards one random card from her hand. Every time this monster destroys an opponents monster by battle, the opponent places the top card from their deck in the Graveyard.[/spoiler]
Update: 6/9/2011/: Added 4 new traps and 5 new spells.

[ragnarok1945]

for monsters like Zom, not a token, you mean counter

Forgotten Beast's effect is also boring, give it an effect while it's on the field, not just when it's summoned

5.5/10

[Alice Moonflowyr]

[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1307564596' post='5267537']
for monsters like Zom, not a token, you mean counter

Forgotten Beast's effect is also boring, give it an effect while it's on the field, not just when it's summoned

5.5/10
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gotcha.

[lvl1hero]

[u]OCG[/u] = Good
[u]Images[/u] = Good
[u]Comments:[/u]
[b](1)[/b] ... [u]Ragnarok1945[/u] is correct on [b]Zom, Misery Urchin's[/b] effect... ... the part where its "place a Misery Token"... you can (or should?) make it "place 1 Misery Counter" since thats how most card's effect seems to look like nowadays... ... but i'm sure you just forgot which term it was suppose to be (token, counter, same shiet haha)...
[b](2)[/b] ... your Trap Card [b]Incarnation of the Forgotten[/b]... it kinda confused me a little... if you can... maybe you can clear up the part where it says "[i]lose Life Points[/i]" because i'm thinking you intend to mean that YOU... the controller of [b]Incarnation of the Forgotten[/b]... loses Life Points for negating your opponents card... right???... xP
[b](3)[/b] ... i was thinking you can make [b]He Who Walks Alone[/b] a tuner... since you have a Synchro monster ([i]Horlaten, King of Misery Lore[/i]) with a badass effect thats no where near broken... (possibly my favorite out of the collection of Misery)...
[b](4)[/b] ... i dont like [b]Sorrow[/b]... i guess because he's a Normal Monster Card with low attack and theres no additional card in your collection that involves using it... ... i mean... if i opened a Misery Booster Pack (haha) and got a [b]Sorrow[/b] i would be like "aww man!" hahaha... ... and i thought maybe you can make him a "Tuner" monster... but even then... =t
[b](5)[/b] ... (heh)... i'll bet you're having trouble with your monster card's original ATK power huh... ... its alright... you can up your lv4 monster's ATK a bit... they're not too strong even with your backup card's increasing their attack...
(ex: [b]Yukel, Servant of Misery[/b] & [b]Warrior of Misery[/b])
[u]Overall Rating:[/u] [b]7/10[/b]

[Alice Moonflowyr]

[quote name='lvl1hero' timestamp='1307648216' post='5269910']
[u]OCG[/u] = Good
[u]Images[/u] = Good
[u]Comments:[/u]
[b](1)[/b] ... [u]Ragnarok1945[/u] is correct on [b]Zom, Misery Urchin's[/b] effect... ... the part where its "place a Misery Token"... you can (or should?) make it "place 1 Misery Counter" since thats how most card's effect seems to look like nowadays... ... but i'm sure you just forgot which term it was suppose to be (token, counter, same shiet haha)...
[b](2)[/b] ... your Trap Card [b]Incarnation of the Forgotten[/b]... it kinda confused me a little... if you can... maybe you can clear up the part where it says "[i]lose Life Points[/i]" because i'm thinking you intend to mean that YOU... the controller of [b]Incarnation of the Forgotten[/b]... loses Life Points for negating your opponents card... right???... xP
[b](3)[/b] ... i was thinking you can make [b]He Who Walks Alone[/b] a tuner... since you have a Synchro monster ([i]Horlaten, King of Misery Lore[/i]) with a badass effect thats no where near broken... (possibly my favorite out of the collection of Misery)...
[b](4)[/b] ... i dont like [b]Sorrow[/b]... i guess because he's a Normal Monster Card with low attack and theres no additional card in your collection that involves using it... ... i mean... if i opened a Misery Booster Pack (haha) and got a [b]Sorrow[/b] i would be like "aww man!" hahaha... ... and i thought maybe you can make him a "Tuner" monster... but even then... =t
[b](5)[/b] ... (heh)... i'll bet you're having trouble with your monster card's original ATK power huh... ... its alright... you can up your lv4 monster's ATK a bit... they're not too strong even with your backup card's increasing their attack...
(ex: [b]Yukel, Servant of Misery[/b] & [b]Warrior of Misery[/b])
[u]Overall Rating:[/u] [b]7/10[/b]
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Awnsers to your stuff.

1. yes i got confused.
2. First of all, its [b]Incantation[/b] of the Forgotten not Incarnation. Second of all, yes it makes you lose Life Points for negating the card (or discard cards).
3. He Who Walks Alone would be a pointless Tuner because he is supposed to be out there long-term (just look at his effect!). Also, Horlaten has a specific Tuner (Misery Tuner).
4. Sorrow is fodder or tribute materiel.
5. Yukel isnt supposed to be that strong and Warriors ATK and DEF are supposed to be equal. Though mabye I could do 1600 or 1700.

Watch for the next update. And thnx for the rating!

[lvl1hero]

[quote name='se15fy' timestamp='1307649711' post='5269939']
Awnsers to your stuff.

1. yes i got confused.
2. First of all, its [b]Incantation[/b] of the Forgotten not Incarnation. Second of all, yes it makes you lose Life Points for negating the card (or discard cards).
3. He Who Walks Alone would be a pointless Tuner because he is supposed to be out there long-term (just look at his effect!). Also, Horlaten has a specific Tuner (Misery Tuner).
4. Sorrow is fodder or tribute materiel.
5. Yukel isnt supposed to be that strong and Warriors ATK and DEF are supposed to be equal. Though mabye I could do 1600 or 1700.

Watch for the next update. And thnx for the rating!
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(2) ... mybad haha... i was kinda rushing cuz i stayed in your forum for like 2 hours haha... i enjoyed where you were going with your deck... ... but the card could use an update then...
(3) ... ah... i see... if thats what his job is then sounds good!...
(4) ... haha... okay...

... i'll be there... remind me?... xP

[Nu-Mou Knight]

Why yes, I think I will give your cards a look se15fy I like them, quite a bit. Very original, your effects make very much sense, and OCG is good. Though your images for...Sword of Sadness and Dark Forces are at Work could use a bit of touching up, for aesthetic problems with the dimensions and words at the top of the pic respectively. I like how all the cards work very well together. Obviously, they should in a set like this, but these are very well done. It's as if the Archfiends and Elem Heroes had a baby I give you an 8/10

[Alice Moonflowyr]

[quote name='Nu-Mou Knight' timestamp='1307839159' post='5275931'] Why yes, I think I will give your cards a look se15fy I like them, quite a bit. Very original, your effects make very much sense, and OCG is good. Though your images for...Sword of Sadness and Dark Forces are at Work could use a bit of touching up, for aesthetic problems with the dimensions and words at the top of the pic respectively. I like how all the cards work very well together. Obviously, they should in a set like this, but these are very well done. It's as if the Archfiends and Elem Heroes had a baby I give you an 8/10 [/quote] Cool. As for the pics, i'm only allowed on Google, and their not the best source of images. Do you have any suggestions? (please...) <BR>Oh, and, which is your fav? least fav?

[Nu-Mou Knight]

Hmm...I take it you're not allowed on DeviantART. Google isn't that bad, you just might have to specify image size to Larger than 400x300 or be more specific, visualize what kind of picture you're going for and type a base description. As for Least and Most fav...that's a tough question there Mr. Trebek

I suppose my least favorite card would have to be..."Sadness Abolished...For Now". It seems very...basic. Any person who used a "Misery" Deck would use it, but maybe you could limit its crazy usability due to enormous amounts of Misery Counters, like having in its effect "This card cannot be returned to the hand from the Graveyard" or bringing back the monsters destroyed in a few turns, as a throwback to the name. Most favorite, I can't really say. Maybe Horlaten, since he'd be the ultimate support monster. Though, his Level seems a bit low for 2800 ATK points. Maybe you could lower the ATK, and have him gain ATK when he's the only card on the field, or you have no cards in your hand? He is the king of Misery and Loneliness, after all.

[Alice Moonflowyr]

[quote name='Nu-Mou Knight' timestamp='1307841154' post='5276014'] Hmm...I take it you're not allowed on DeviantART. Google isn't that bad, you just might have to specify image size to Larger than 400x300 or be more specific, visualize what kind of picture you're going for and type a base description. As for Least and Most fav...that's a tough question there Mr. Trebek I suppose my least favorite card would have to be..."Sadness Abolished...For Now". It seems very...basic. Any person who used a "Misery" Deck would use it, but maybe you could limit its crazy usability due to enormous amounts of Misery Counters, like having in its effect "This card cannot be returned to the hand from the Graveyard" or bringing back the monsters destroyed in a few turns, as a throwback to the name. Most favorite, I can't really say. Maybe Horlaten, since he'd be the ultimate support monster. Though, his Level seems a bit low for 2800 ATK points. Maybe you could lower the ATK, and have him gain ATK when he's the only card on the field, or you have no cards in your hand? He is the king of Misery and Loneliness, after all. [/quote] Wow. Horlaten is quite popular. I have a comment on one of my unfinised versions of this thread saying he is awesome. Love the idea of him gaining ATK, but his effect is already kinda long. Think I'll pass on that one. As for "Sadness Abolished...For Now" I will edit it so you cant get it back. What I think is surprising is that my favs are nobody elses.Mine are Misery Reaper cus of his badass effect, and Zsoop, for awesome pic and effect. And, Mister Trebek...?

[Alice Moonflowyr]

Bumpity-Bump-Bump.

[smithy333]

9/10 nice set of cards.



but how do i make a set like you?

[Phœnīcius Infīnius VII]

OCG seems nice but do they even make Vanillas anymore? The pics could use some touching up. Maybe some editing. Otherwise 7/10.

[Alice Moonflowyr]

[quote name='SSxMINI LUCAS' timestamp='1308506003' post='5295444']
OCG seems nice but do they even make Vanillas anymore? The pics could use some touching up. Maybe some editing. Otherwise 7/10.
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Yes, they make them.