Spoon Posted June 9, 2011 Report Share Posted June 9, 2011 [center][IMG]http://img607.imageshack.us/img607/2846/petk.jpg[/IMG] [quote]Once per turn, if this card is the only monster you control: draw 1 card and reveal it. If that card is a Level 4 or lower monster, equip it to this card. If not, discard 1 card. While this card is equipped with a monster, it cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn: you can banish 1 monster in your Graveyard and target 1 monster equipped to this card whose Level is equal to or lower than that of the banished monster; Special Summon it. It's effect(s) is negated. When this card leaves the field: destroy all monster Special Summoned this way.[/quote][/center] Rolled that concept around several times and I'm still not happy with the result... I guess she's supposed to be the older sister of Infernity Randomizer, or something like that Also tried to use the new "Problem-solving card text", though I'm not sure if I got it right. PS: LoL art is lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 9, 2011 Report Share Posted June 9, 2011 doesn't look zombie like for the special summoning of the monster, don't negate its effects permanently, just like 3 turns is enough 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spoon Posted June 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1307637426' post='5269522'] doesn't look zombie like for the special summoning of the monster, don't negate its effects permanently, just like 3 turns is enough 8.8/10[/quote] Because in this topic a Level 4 or lower monster survives 3 turns on the field Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted June 9, 2011 Report Share Posted June 9, 2011 First effect: Run in Dark World with no possible targets. Whee! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 Interesting concept, I actually really like it... So many words, not sure if I followed it completely, but it sounds like the OCG is all good I was hoping for Beast and Beast-Warrior support from the name, but zombies need some loving as well[quote name='newhat' timestamp='1307663524' post='5270402'] First effect: Run in Dark World with no possible targets. Whee! [/quote] Broww, Snow, Cerli 3 Incredibly important Dark World monsters that are Levels 3, 4, and 1 respectively... so this would SO NOT work for DWs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spoon Posted June 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 [quote name='newhat' timestamp='1307663524' post='5270402'] First effect: Run in Dark World with no possible targets. Whee![/quote] Why? "Discard 1 card" is an effect, and since it doesn't restrict that choice in any way, you can discard whatever you want, Goldd, Dandylion... [quote name='∞ Skiel ∞' timestamp='1307673031' post='5270835'] Interesting concept, I actually really like it... So many words, not sure if I followed it completely, but it sounds like the OCG is all good I was hoping for Beast and Beast-Warrior support from the name, but zombies need some loving as well[/quote] I was going more for the Zombie support because... yeah, I guess because of "Pet Semetary" (I should've made a pun about that in the name)... oh great, I actually spelled it wrong and now I have to make the whole card over again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 [quote name='∞ Skiel ∞' timestamp='1307673031' post='5270835'] Broww, Snow, Cerli 3 Incredibly important Dark World monsters that are Levels 3, 4, and 1 respectively... so this would SO NOT work for DWs [/quote] I kinda feel it would. Draw one of those, you get the equip effect. Draw a Spell or Trap, discard a card and keep that Spell or Trap. Pro moves man. Pro moves. Now whether it would be competitive or not is yet to be seen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 Maybe just remove this " While this card is equipped with a monster, it cannot be destroyed by battle" or make it with some drawback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spoon Posted June 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 [quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1307698344' post='5271371'] Maybe just remove this " While this card is equipped with a monster, it cannot be destroyed by battle" or make it with some drawback[/quote] There has to be a benefit to this whole equipping thing, because otherwise I could just have the drawn monster Summoned and everything is fine. But I wanted to give it at least a touch of "pet" feel to it, which somebody can clip to themself... something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spoon Posted June 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2011 *bump* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
j3tears Posted June 12, 2011 Report Share Posted June 12, 2011 va va va me latee.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen-Psi Posted June 12, 2011 Report Share Posted June 12, 2011 O.O that little girl scares me and that's enough for it to be a zombie in my book. Also this just increasing what zombie are good at, special summoning, hey if it's not broken don't fix it. 8/10 good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spoon Posted June 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 [quote name='j3tears' timestamp='1307899864' post='5277695'] va va va me latee..[/quote] ... [quote name='Overmind_Psi' timestamp='1307901558' post='5277773'] O.O that little girl scares me and that's enough for it to be a zombie in my book. Also this just increasing what zombie are good at, special summoning, hey if it's not broken don't fix it. 8/10 good job![/quote] That's the point, I can barely say if it's broken or not... but hey, who gives a damn, she has a teddy bear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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