Beastsniper12 Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 [img]http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/9276/429126.jpg[/img] Heres the card lore rate, comment critizise, idk do something! 1 Light monster 1 Dark monster 1 Earth monster 1 Wind monster 1 Fire monster 1 Water This card can only be Special Summoned by Banishing the above monsters in your graveyard. OR with the effect of "Mechforce-Annihilate!". This card is uneffected by the effect of Trap, and Monster effects. When this card is Summoned, destroy all Set and Field Spell cards on the field. When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle inflict 500 points of Effect damage to your opponent. This card can attack tiwce during the same Battle Phase. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. Any battle damage this card inflicts to your opponent is halved. ATK/3500 DEF/3500 Edited it Heres Mechforce, Annihilate! [img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/9276/429126.jpg[/img] This card can only be used to Special Summon "Mechforce-Striker". OR "Mechforceforce-Ultamech Worldbreaker". If used to Special Summon "Mechforce-Striker", you must discard you entire hand to Special Summon the card from your graveyard. If this card is used to Special Summon "Mechforce-Ultamech Worldbreaker, you must send up to 4 Synchro monsters in your extra deck to the graveyard that include "Mechforce" in their name, and discard 4 cards from your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 Wrong section. Post writen cards, in the.... written cards section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beastsniper12 Posted June 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 [quote name='Manpole' timestamp='1307690427' post='5271279'] Wrong section. Post writen cards, in the.... written cards section. [/quote] do you know how to post the card i thot i did but i guess not[quote name='Beastsniper12' timestamp='1307690567' post='5271282'] do you know how to post the card i thot i did but i guess not [/quote] nvm figured it out! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 Alright... 1 LIGHT monster + 1 DARK monster + 1 EARTH monster + 1 WIND monster + 1 FIRE monster + 1 WATER monster This card can only be Special Summoned by banishing the above cards from your Graveyard, or with the effect of "Mechforce-Annihilate!". This card is unaffected by the effects of Spells, Traps, and Monster effects. When this card is Summoned, [u]destroy all Set and Field cards on the field[/u]. When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, inflict 500 points of effect damage to your opponent. [b]This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase[/b]. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. Any battle damage this card inflicts to your opponent is halved. (mostly fixed) (The underlined portion was weird... I didn't know what you meant so I didn't know how to fix it) (The bolded section I know is incorrect ocg, but can't think of how to fix it atm) Anyways, it seems a bit OP (even though it has tough summoning conditions) because it is unaffected by spells, traps and monster effects... you should leave one of them out so this card is vulnerable in some way, otherwise it is basically unstoppable. Also, I am not sure what "Mechforce-Annihilates" effect is, but make sure it is still difficult to summon this card, as if you get it you are sure to win. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 @Manpole: If you're gonna use new OCG, at least look up the rest of it. Don't just pick and choose what parts you want to use. Being literally immune to all effects and having 4000 ATK makes it broken, even with the harsh summoning conditions. Tone it down a bit, but I can't do anything else unless you post the rest of the stuff so I can see exactly how easy it is to pull. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 That is the only new ocg I know, because I don't study new cards. I've seen it on a few recent cards posted. If you saw that there were more fixes to be made, by all means, correct them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 You're using an OCG form that you have limited knowledge over? If that's the case, research it up or use old OCG. There was a lot more changed then just RFP to Banish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 if you're going to make it attack multiple times during the same battle phase, you should have said it can't attack your opponent directly yes getting all 6 attributes is hard to summon it, but 4000 atk is way too much for direct attacks 7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beastsniper12 Posted June 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1307704889' post='5271456'] if you're going to make it attack multiple times during the same battle phase, you should have said it can't attack your opponent directly yes getting all 6 attributes is hard to summon it, but 4000 atk is way too much for direct attacks 7.7/10 [/quote] it does Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 [quote]but 4000 atk is way too much for direct attacks[/quote] He restrict it, it can't attack opp directly. I agree about how hard this card can be Summoned, having 6 different Atrribute is hard and rather rare to have it but it contradict with the Spell Card make this easy to Summon. Plus 4000 ATK is hard to be beaten, except by the Spell Card which is not immune about Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beastsniper12 Posted June 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 [quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1307729235' post='5272182'] He restrict it, it can't attack opp directly. I agree about how hard this card can be Summoned, having 6 different Atrribute is hard and rather rare to have it but it contradict with the Spell Card make this easy to Summon. Plus 4000 ATK is hard to be beaten, except by the Spell Card which is not immune about [/quote] so whats you score on it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 good you lowered the atk and all now I can raise the rate to 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beastsniper12 Posted June 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1307768042' post='5273458'] good you lowered the atk and all now I can raise the rate to 8.5/10 [/quote] Did you see my reply to your first comment?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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