Valkyrus Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 [IMG]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/tfhdrfged.jpg[/IMG] btw his name is pronounced Mira-cless , it's not a typo. It actually might be a bit UP'ed but anyways~ comment/rate/love/hate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 Why is the card big? And I rate it 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 I think it should be a Level 6. But that's just me. I like the name. Picture is great. Slightly Up'd to me, but I was never a good judge of that. OCG sounds good, but not a good judge of that either. I like it overall. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 [quote name='se15fy' timestamp='1307725124' post='5271964'] Why is the card big? And I rate it 6/10. [/quote] You young people and your rating without commenting and your critics about size and your- *snore* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 [quote name='BlindMonkey' timestamp='1307726638' post='5272021'] You young people and your rating without commenting and your critics about size and your- *snore* [/quote] Is that supposed to be a joke or are you actually, like, scolding me or something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted June 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 [quote name='se15fy' timestamp='1307725124' post='5271964'] Why is the card big? And I rate it 6/10. [/quote] Because my hands are as big as helipads. [quote name='darkstar_316' timestamp='1307726284' post='5272008'] I think it should be a Level 6. But that's just me.I like the name.Picture is great.Slightly Up'd to me, but I was never a good judge of that.OCG sounds good, but not a good judge of that either.I like it overall. 9/10 [/quote] well it can't be Normal Summoned anyways, so I don't know how making it level 6 would make any difference. Anyways, yeah, kind of UP'ed, but I think if I make the summoning conditions a little more easy it'd be good ^^ thanks for the feedback[quote name='se15fy' timestamp='1307726839' post='5272034'] Is that supposed to be a joke or are you actually, like, scolding me or something? [/quote] go spam somewhere else please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unbreakerable Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 i give this a 10/10. in my opinion this is a perfect anti-infernity card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 [quote name='se15fy' timestamp='1307726839' post='5272034'] Is that supposed to be a joke or are you actually, like, scolding me or something? [/quote] Go watch YGOTAS or gtfo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 [quote name='Gandorator' timestamp='1307726944' post='5272038'] well it can't be Normal Summoned anyways, so I don't know how making it level 6 would make any difference. Anyways, yeah, kind of UP'ed, but I think if I make the summoning conditions a little more easy it'd be good ^^ [/quote] That would make it more balanced. And about the level: it just looks like a Level 6 to me. No need to fix that though. I'll raise it to 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 Oh, I forgot. OT: If you're using the newer OCG, or the term Banish, be sure to use this structure, too: Requirements[b]:[/b] Cost[b];[/b] effect. For example, this. [i]If your opponent activates a card effect(s) while they have no cards in their hand: Negate the activation and destroy that card(s).[/i] [i] [/i] As you can see above, requirements first, after a colon the cost, after a semi-colon the actual effect. Got it? ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted June 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 [quote name='BlindMonkey' timestamp='1307727434' post='5272087'] Oh, I forgot. OT: If you're using the newer OCG, or the term Banish, be sure to use this structure, too: Requirements[b]:[/b] Cost[b];[/b] effect. For example, this. [i]If your opponent activates a card effect(s) while they have no cards in their hand: Negate the activation and destroy that card(s).[/i] [i] [/i] As you can see above, requirements first, after a colon the cost, after a semi-colon the actual effect. Got it? ^^ [/quote] thanks for the fix ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 reminds me a little of the card Magic Drain: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Magic_Drain although it is certainly a stronger form of it given that (and magic drain is very good), I'll give you 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted June 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1307732208' post='5272328'] reminds me a little of the card Magic Drain: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Magic_Drain although it is certainly a stronger form of it given that (and magic drain is very good), I'll give you 9.3/10 [/quote] :'D thanks. but what if I made it a bit easier to special summon? I realzied it's a bit too hard to summon for what it does. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted June 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 It can be Summoned very easily, it just cost's multiple cards, so I think that pretty much balances its Special Summon effect. Banishing the cards hurts most decks, but if you were to add this to a deck it would probably be one that can benefit from removing cards from play. If you think its UP, just increase its ATK to 2400. I think its second effect could be shortened, (and read better) if you change it to "Your opponent must discard 1 card to activate a Spell, Trap, or Monster Card effect" Also, are you sure opponent is supposed to be capitalized..? that seems strange to me. Oh, and the card size and border... I like them to be normal, although that doesn't change the cards effect =p. Overall I like it, I don't really think its UP, the only change I would make (other than changing the wording of the second effect) would be to slightly increase this monsters ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 [quote name='Gandorator' timestamp='1307733451' post='5272394'] :'D thanks. but what if I made it a bit easier to special summon? I realzied it's a bit too hard to summon for what it does. [/quote] fine, let's see the modifications to the summoning conditions first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted June 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1307768114' post='5273460'] fine, let's see the modifications to the summoning conditions first [/quote] Banish 1 card from your side of the field, your graveyard and the top card of your Deck? removed the banishing of a card from your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonstone Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 I like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marcher boyz Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 A -2 for a generic massive body that will more than pay for itself 99.99% of the time. Broke/10 [quote name='Gandorator' timestamp='1307792589' post='5274071'] removed the banishing of a card from your hand. [/quote] STOP MAKING IT MORE INSANE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted June 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 [quote name='marcher boyz' timestamp='1307793704' post='5274088'] A -2 for a generic massive body that will more than pay for itself 99.99% of the time. Broke/10 STOP MAKING IT MORE INSANE [/quote] dude, chill?.. Don't need to go caps lock raging on me. When you rate, please give reasons, otherwise I'll take your comment for nothing more than spamming. Anyways is Broke[b]n[/b]/10 even a rating?.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marcher boyz Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 [quote name='Gandorator' timestamp='1307796566' post='5274133'] dude, chill?.. Don't need to go caps lock raging on me. When you rate, please give reasons, otherwise I'll take your comment for nothing more than spamming. Anyways is Broke[b]n[/b]/10 even a rating?.. [/quote] If you made this srsly then I really do. [quote name='marcher boyz' timestamp='1307793704' post='5274088'] A -2 for a generic massive body that will more than pay for itself 99.99% of the time.[/quote] There's nothing more I can say about a card that creates slippery slope this bad. yes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted June 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 [quote name='marcher boyz' timestamp='1307800137' post='5274199'] If you made this srsly then I really do. There's nothing more I can say about a card that creates slippery slope this bad. yes [/quote] ooooookaaaaay...... No one asked you to say anything. Move on and stop spamming my thread please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marcher boyz Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 [quote name='Gandorator' timestamp='1307802565' post='5274289'] No one asked you to say anything. Move on and stop spamming my thread please. [/quote] [quote name='Gandorator' timestamp='1307724329' post='5271926']comment/rate/love/hate [/quote] Anyway, how is telling you how your card is badly designed spamming? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 [quote name='marcher boyz' timestamp='1307807920' post='5274527'] Anyway, how is telling you how your card is badly designed spamming? [/quote] This'll be like you vs Black, aaaaaall over again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marcher boyz Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 [quote name='BlindMonkey' timestamp='1307808761' post='5274566'] This'll be like you vs Black, aaaaaall over again. [/quote] I hope that it'll be a lot faster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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