Kaegos the scorching dragon

[Nickk]

I was bored and I maked a new dragons:
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Lore:
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set.This card cannoct be Special Summoned except by having exactly 3 FIRE cards in your Graveyard.You can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy all DARK monsters on the field.
[img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/5960/428792.jpg[/img]
Lore:
When this card destroys opponent's monster as result of battle,your opponent takes damage to their life points equal to half the ATK of the destroyed monster.
Fusion monster and Spell:
1) 2)
[img]http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/2786/428792j.jpg[/img] [img]http://img607.imageshack.us/img607/5960/428792.jpg[/img]

[Dragon7OP]

Kaegos:
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set.This card cannot be Special Summoned unless you have 3 FIRE monsters in the graveyard.You can pay 2000 Life Points to destroy all DARK monsters on the field.

Minor Grammer fix, and 2000 life points is really high for only DARK. If it was all monsters, or less life points, good. But that's a lot to pay. Also, it should be a level or two higher, with that ATK and DEF.

Bolshie:
When this card destroys opponent's monster as result of battle,your opponent takes damage to their life points equal to half the ATK of the destroyed monster.

Again, minor grammer. The effect, ATK and DEf are pretty good, but I think the DEF could be better. It seems low for a level 7 monster.


Red-Ice Winged Dragon
First, the level. With 4500 ATK, it should be topping level 10 at least. Level 9 seems low. Second, for the fusion materials it should say "Kaegos The Scorching Dragon + Bolshie The Frozen Wing". The terms you use now apply to synchros. Last, its effect should state "When this card is succesfully Fusion Summoned, you can draw 2 cards and destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field."

It's not bad, just a little off in the balance of stats.


All in all, not bad. They just need a little polishing. 7/10

[MibeR]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by having exactly 3 FIRE monsters in your Graveyard. You can pay 2000 Life Points to destroy all DARK monsters on the field.-[b]->2000 LP seems bit too much for much for me, since it only applies in DARK. So, 1000 better[/b]

Lore:
When this card destroys monster by battle, your opponent takes damage equal to half of the destroyed monster's ATK[b].--> Common effect but seems decent and still good[/b]

Overall 7/10

[Nickk]

Thx for your replies, I will work on stats.

[ragnarok1945]

1st one you can give another effect since it only applies to DARK monsters,

for Red Ice-Winged Dragon, I'm surprised you didn't say in the effect it's also treated as a WATER monster

8.3/10

[Nickk]

I will fix that. soon

[Zen-Psi]

Stats are off by a bit, but okay.

7/10