PGR Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 This is my second attempt at a spell card. On my first one I got fairly good ratings so I thought I'd try again. I'm not sure if the card grammar is correct, but I guess I'll see. [img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/6076/430090.jpg[/img] This card's effect cannot be activated except by sending 1 Level 6 or higher monster from your side of the field to the Graveyard. Each turn, select 1 Level 6 or lower monster from your Deck and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position on your side of the field. At the end of each turn, shuffle the selected card back into your Deck. Pay 1000 Life Points each turn or this card is destroyed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PokemonandRoblox Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 OCG is ok, pic is great i would say 9/10 here is the fixed lore This card cannot be activated except by sending 1 Level 6 or higher monster from your side of the field to the Graveyard. Each turn, pick 1 Level 6 or lower monster from your deck and Special Summon it in face-up Attack position on your side. At the end of each turn, place the selected card back into your deck and shuffle it. Pay 1000 Life Points each turn or this card is destroyed. Any mistakes you see, you can fix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PGR Posted June 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Thanks, I made the fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen-Psi Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Risky of a card don't you think? But that's why it has roulette in its name XD. Its okay and I agree with pokemon's fixed lore. 7.9/10 Keep getting better dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Wow. Great card, not sure if it should be a field spell though. I would make it a Continuous. The pic is great. OCG seems fine. It's balanced. And overall, I like it. 9.5/10. I think Position and Deck have to be capitalized, but not sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PGR Posted June 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Crap? I made it a field spell? I realized that when I was making it and thought I had already turned it into a continuous. I'll fix thatOk, fixed it, I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Don't worry I've done that too. It happens to everyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 neat gambling card will do fine for the quick synchro summoning to the field, so I like it 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 12, 2011 Report Share Posted June 12, 2011 THis is your second, so i'll do the fixing This card's effect cannot be activated except by sending 1 Level 6 or higher monster from your side of the field to the Graveyard. Each turn, select 1 Level 6 or lower monster from your Deck and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position on your side of the field. At the end of each turns, shuffle selected card back into your Deck. Pay 1000 Life Points each turn or this card is destroyed. The idea is decent, sacrifice one to SS another we want. But paying 1000 LP is bit too much for me, i'll down it to around 600 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PGR Posted June 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2011 Well, the thing is, unless the monster's effect says differently, they can summon any level 6 they want. You only need one tribute and that's the turn this card is activated.This could cause devistation in one turn. 1000 is sufficient. It'll keep the player from using the card for too long. I'll fix the OCG, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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