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This is my second attempt at a spell card. On my first one I got fairly good ratings so I thought I'd try again. I'm not sure if the card grammar is correct, but I guess I'll see.
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This card's effect cannot be activated except by sending 1 Level 6 or higher monster from your side of the field to the Graveyard. Each turn, select 1 Level 6 or lower monster from your Deck and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position on your side of the field. At the end of each turn, shuffle the selected card back into your Deck. Pay 1000 Life Points each turn or this card is destroyed.
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OCG is ok, pic is great i would say 9/10

here is the fixed lore

This card cannot be activated except by sending 1 Level 6 or higher monster from your side of the field to the Graveyard. Each turn, pick 1 Level 6 or lower monster from your deck and Special Summon it in face-up Attack position on your side. At the end of each turn, place the selected card back into your deck and shuffle it. Pay 1000 Life Points each turn or this card is destroyed.

Any mistakes you see, you can fix
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THis is your second, so i'll do the fixing

This card's effect cannot be activated except by sending 1 Level 6 or higher monster from your side of the field to the Graveyard. Each turn, select 1 Level 6 or lower monster from your Deck and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position on your side of the field. At the end of each turns, shuffle selected card back into your Deck. Pay 1000 Life Points each turn or this card is destroyed.

The idea is decent, sacrifice one to SS another we want. But paying 1000 LP is bit too much for me, i'll down it to around 600
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Well, the thing is, unless the monster's effect says differently, they can summon any level 6 they want. You only need one tribute and that's the turn this card is activated.This could cause devistation in one turn. 1000 is sufficient. It'll keep the player from using the card for too long. I'll fix the OCG, though.
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