SixhundredSixtySix Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 [center][img]http://img542.imageshack.us/img542/52/430323.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by banishing 3 face-up monsters you control. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 monster you control. This card's ATK and DEF become double the ATK and DEF of the tributed monster until the end of the turn. When this card battles with a monster, the monster is banished after damage calculation. Picture is from Google. Im just starting out, so criticism is good? (: Thanks.[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shelds9 Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 I think it is pretty good actually! It is rare you will tribute a monster on the turn it is summoned because you have to banish 3 already. Maybe make it, "Once per turn, is this card would be destroyed by battle, it is not destroyed". I have a feeling you will be good in the future. Also, try this place for pics: http://s825.photobucket.com/home/JazinKay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Not bad. Has an air of an anime boss' trump card. It looks more like a DARK monster than a FIRE monster; and 'Hell Hound' doesn't really fit with the RFP-based "D.D.". Perhaps 'Nightmare Beast' or something along those lines? [b]OCG Fix:[/b] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by banishing 3 face-up monsters [i]you control[/i]. This card [i]cannot be destroyed by battle[/i]. Once per turn, you [i]can Tribute 1[/i] monster [i]you control[/i]. This card's ATK and DEF [i]become[/i] double the ATK and DEF of the tributed monster until the end of the turn. Additional thoughts: You might want to make it so it banishes the targeted monster, considering this is a "D.D." monster. Also, you'll want to make it until 'the end of your opponent's turn', otherwise, you'll have a 0/0 window to your Life Points when your opponent attacks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SixhundredSixtySix Posted June 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Hmmm... I was leaning toward something more on the side of its ATK and DEF, so Ill keep it for now, but thank you! And thats why I said 'May' instead of 'Must' that way you dont have to tribute one on the turn you put it down. But thank you! I really appreciatte it! and hope so!@Max Darkness: Thanks for the OCG fix! I appreciatte it. And I think I will change it up a bit actually. Thanks a bunch! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cobalt2 Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Great card! Is this really your first? Instead of tributing monster for attack, you could banish it to be better for DDs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SixhundredSixtySix Posted June 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Thanks alot! Yes it is my first card. I mean, I used to have an account, and mess around. But I dont know the username/password/what email i used. So this is my first serious card though. And hm. Possibility(: I like to mix things up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unbreakerable Posted June 12, 2011 Report Share Posted June 12, 2011 ha ha that happend to me to. anyway this is really good work keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 12, 2011 Report Share Posted June 12, 2011 last effect reminds me a little of Dark Magician of Chaos's effect, which is nice doubling the atk/def? I can see this easily up to the 5000 atk range, but I'll let it go 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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