AGARTHA Posted June 12, 2011 Report Share Posted June 12, 2011 my first card [attachment=32757:430581.jpg] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 "graveyard" needs to be capitalized. Overall this card is OP, it takes a luster dragon, and will therefore have at least 1 in the Graveyard. So this cards base ATK is pretty much 4100, and has a max of 9100. Also by removing from play a single Luster Dragon (or #2) from the Grave, it can clear the field...? Decrease the ATK gain to + 300 per Luster Dragon (and #2) in the Graveyard, and change its second effect so that instead of clearing the field, removing from play 1 Luster Dragon allows you to destroy 1 face-up card your opponent controls. (or face-down). If you made those changes (or add your own unique drawbacks) the card would be playable and not so OP. Also, by posting your cards like that it limits who will reply in your thread, post the image by clicking on the card after it is created so that it can be read without clicking on it (and post the lore below it if needed). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cobalt2 Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 Not bad. Make the picture so we can see the lore. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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