PGR Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 Ok, these cards are still in development. I'm positive there is plenty of room for adjustment and so I can get some suggestions, I'm posting them here Early. [spoiler=Haruk, King of the Realm of Inferno] [img]http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/6076/430090.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Banishing 3 Pyro-Type monsters from your Graveyard. Each turn, by Tributing 1 Pyro-Type monster, this card gains ATK equal to that monster's origional ATK, until the End Phase. While you control this face-up card, this card cannot be selected as an attack target by WATER monsters.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Kiri, Spirit of the Swaying Sea] [img]http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/6076/430090.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Banishing 3 Aqua-Type monsters from your Graveyard. If this card is targeted by a monster, Special Summon 1 lvl 4 or lower Aqua-Type monster in face-up ATK from your Graveyard. The Attack is Re-directed to that monster. This card gains 100 ATK for every Aqua-Type monster in your graveyard. While you control this face-up card, this card cannot be selected as an attack target by EARTH monsters.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Gora, Lord of the Land of Stones] [img]http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/6076/430090.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Banishing 3 Rock-Type monsters from your Graveyard. For every Rock-Type Monster on the field, this card gains 300 ATK. While you control this face-up card, this card cannot be selected as an attack target by FIRE monsters.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 "one" -> 1 Fire seems fair water is incredibly UNDER Powered Earth seems slightly over powered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PGR Posted June 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 Ok, thanks. I'll fix the OCG error, add something extra to the water one, and remove the defense gain from the Earth oneOk, fixed a few things. Anything else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PGR Posted June 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 C'mon...Nobody? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 OCG fix along with the suggestion: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by banishing 3 Pyro-Type monsters from your Graveyard. Each turn by Tributing 1 Pyro-Type monster, this card gains ATK equal to that monster's original ATK, until the End Phase. While you control this face-up card, this card cannot be targeted for an attack by WATER monsters. [b]The ATK is bit too much for me, 2800 is fine. It can still raise the ATK though[/b] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by banishing 3 Aqua-Type monsters from your Graveyard. If this card is targeted for an attack, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Aqua-Type monster in face-up Attack Position from your Graveyard. Then attack that monster with the Special Summoned monster. This card gains 100 ATK for each Aqua-Type monster in your Graveyard. While you control this face-up card, this card cannot be targeted for an attack by EARTH monsters. [b]I rather confused what you're trying to say in this effect, so made it in my version, tell me if i mistaken[/b] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by banishing 3 Rock-Type monsters from your Graveyard. For every Rock-Type Monster on the field, this card gains 300 ATK. While you control this face-up card, his card cannot be targeted for an attack by FIRE monsters. [b]Balanced and fair enough[/b] Overall 8.8/10 = Good for newcomer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 the fire monster is a bit OPed, you should have put a limit on how much atk for the tributing otherwise I can easily see this getting up to 5000 atk 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PGR Posted June 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 The fire monster isn't OPed. Its power returns to normal at the end phase. That effect is the same as Raviel's, a current forbidden beast. I modeled that card off of him. You got Kiri's effect wroung. The special summoned monster does not attack the attacking monster. The attacking monster's attack is re-directed to the special summoned monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PGR Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Do you already check my suggestion, it is inside the lore and in above post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PGR Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 I just don't find any reason to add your changes for I don't see the meaning in those. I noted that in the post above along with Shadow's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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