macload6 Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 I hope you like it my new creation of yu-gi-oh card !!! [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/244pmvt.jpg[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azphreal Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 For this early in your card-making career, not bad. However, it should be at least Level 8, or have a lower ATK, or even better, both. 'Summon' should be 'Summoned' in both cases. 'dark' and 'light' should be 'DARK' and 'LIGHT' respectively. 'grave' should be 'Graveyard'. 'him' should be 'it'. Since this one of your first, I won't point out everything wrong with it, just the basic OCG errors. Good work, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 All about to say already pointed by above. Very well done for a first-timer, 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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