GOD OF FLAMES - THOTH

[Mazaki Anzu]

This is the 4th Egyptian God Card i made up.

I made two version of this card.
First the Anime Version and the TCG Version.


Anime:

[img]http://h40.img-up.net/GODOFFLAMEsh4x.png[/img]



Note: The effect is never printed really clearly on the God Cards.







TCG:

[img]http://i69.img-up.net/GODOFFLAMEzzfi.png[/img]



Lore:
You must Tribute 3 monsters to Normal Summon this card (you cannot Set this card). The Normal Summon of this card cannot be negated. When this card is Normal Summoned, Spells, Traps, and Effect Monster effects cannot be activated. This card cannot be targeted by the effects of Spells, Traps or Effect Monsters. If this card is Special Summoned, it is sent to the Graveyard during the End Phase. This card gains 300 ATK and DEF x the number of cards left in your Deck. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can send 10 random cards from your Deck to your Graveyard to inflict 200 damage to your opponent for each Spell Card that was sent to the Graveyard this way.










-Yeah-

[shadowserpent]

It kinda sounds like obelisk with his effect, at the same time it has a slypher feel. I like it. I think ocg might be off, it just sounds awkward to me. 8/10

[PGR]

This card is WAY too OP. A normal deck should be 45 cards. 300x 45 or a bit less could make this card completely invicible. This may be a god card, but even Ra had its weaknesses. At max, minus the tributed monsters and the god, this card can get an aditional 12000 attack points. Far too overpowered. Make it 500 per card in your hand. Something like Slifer. I also see a few OCG errors, but nothing too extreme.

5/10

[ragnarok1945]

"When this card is Normal Summoned, Spells, Traps, and Effect Monster effects cannot be activated"

<---if that's true, then it will also negate its own effect

[MibeR]

200 isn't sufficient for de efforts we already given. 400 then it still fine

[Just Crouton]

It's better than IRL Ra and gives you a massive beater for the troubles of summoning it. Though, I wouldn't make the ATK boost apply when it's Special Summoned and make it only apply when Tribute Summoned.

[quote name='PGR' timestamp='1307986308' post='5280514']
A normal deck should be 45 cards.
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40 cards

And, you have 35 at the start of the duel, 34 on your first turn, will likely take a couple turns, use cards like Pot of Duality and Upstart Goblin to get this to hand faster, so when this hits the field, there will be around 28-30 cards left in the deck for around 8400-9000 ATK.

[Zen-Psi]

Hmmm, sound alittle bit op'ed but I'll have to think it over for awhile.

7/10, for now while I ponder on it.

[Mazaki Anzu]

[quote name='~King Crouton~' timestamp='1308025269' post='5282001']
It's better than IRL Ra and gives you a massive beater for the troubles of summoning it. Though, I wouldn't make the ATK boost apply when it's Special Summoned and make it only apply when Tribute Summoned.



40 cards

And, you have 35 at the start of the duel, 34 on your first turn, will likely take a couple turns, use cards like Pot of Duality and Upstart Goblin to get this to hand faster, so when this hits the field, there will be around 28-30 cards left in the deck for around 8400-9000 ATK.
[/quote]



And this is only if you summon this card quickly. And keep in mind; during each turn, this card's atk and def will decrease and drecrease...