Lua The Life Stream Signer Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 My first own card [img]http://img688.imageshack.us/img688/6127/417671.jpg[/img] Comment, assess and criticize, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 "You can discard this card from your hand when a monster you control is selected as an attack target. The selected monster is not destroyed until the end of the Battle Phase. If the selected monster is a Level 2 or lower monster, you take no battle damage." (fix) (The only change I would make would be, "The selected monster cannot be destroyed by battle this turn, but is destroyed at the End Phase of your opponent's turn." - That way it can take more than 2 hits for you. Anyways the card is pretty good (especially for involving a dog =p). But you need to cut down the picture to edit out the signature/website at the bottom of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 next time write the lore out, was hard to read meh effect, it's little more than delaying when the monster dies for the most part, nothing special 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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