shadowserpent Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 Well I have edited, need new rating again ocg can be fixed. I just randomly came up with the idea. It revolves around sending your monster's to your opponent's graveyard. I will add more cards and make it a set if everybody likes the idea. [img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/1954/425398.jpg[/img] [img]http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/1954/425398.jpg[/img] This card cannot be used to tribute summon. When this card is sent to your opponent's graveyard, it can be special summoned to his/her side of the field. While this card is face-up on there side of the field, all "Mage" monsters on your side of the field gain 500 ATK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 "When this card is Summoned to the field, select 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. The selected monster cannot attack for 3 of your opponent's turns." I believe that is fixed* I don't think that last part of the effect is necessary, because she cannot be summoned again once on the field, and I think she should gain effects if she is successfully Special Summoned from the Graveyard or nobody would Special Summon her =p Overall, nothing special, but still good. Maybe try and make a small set out of this (Fire Mage, etc.) although if you did that, you might have to change "Icy" to "Ice" ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowserpent Posted June 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 Oh thank you I'll fix that. I have made a mage set once before but it didn't go so well but that was when I was in my slump I'll try to add more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragon master azaroth Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 you should go with is change into defense position but can't be destroyed for three turns Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowserpent Posted June 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 Well you see I was kinda going with a swords of reveling light effect on just one monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowserpent Posted June 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 This needs to be bumped .3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 it's little more than a watered down form of Swords of Revealing Light, I'm not impressed 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowserpent Posted June 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 Hmm it's not that impressive I suppose, although I am trying to make support cards that do revolve around this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 Like ragnarok said, it is Swords of Revealing Light in monster form. You should either give it another effect, or change this one. 6/10. And, yes make a set out of it. It would be so cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowserpent Posted June 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 HOLD ON, I'm editing this my brain just thought of an idea that will hopefully not disappoint//will edit in a second. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 [quote name='se15fy' timestamp='1308006072' post='5281318'] Like ragnarok said, it is Swords of Revealing Light in monster form. You should either give it another effect, or change this one. 6/10. And, yes make a set out of it. It would be so cool. [/quote] WATERED DOWN Swords of Revealing Light Remember, Swords of Revealing Light prevents ALL monsters from attacking Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowserpent Posted June 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 EDITED tell me what you think c: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 Now Kiki the Icy Mage is nothing more than a monster form of Tribute to the Doomed, still unimpressive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowserpent Posted June 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 Oh well, my brain hurts this has been a card I could create with thought, so I'm satisfied either way thanks for the criticism at least Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Please if you make another concern with, with this word "When this card is destroyed, it is sent to the opponent's Graveyard instead. My idea was giving an advantage while all Icy monster in opp Graveyard. like they can't Special Summon, draw from Deck unless at Draw Phase .etc and give an ace card like this "While at your opponent's Graveyard there are more than 40 cards. You win the Duel" or Specialized it "more than 15 Icy monster. or whatever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowserpent Posted June 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Oh maha I just started the set I was thinking about stuff like that don't worry xD, all of this good stuff will be incorporated later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Okay then, just giving out suggestion and it is pop out outta my mind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowserpent Posted June 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 yah thanks for suggestions I appreciate them always Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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