Fabiulu Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Sup guys, I decided to make two cards of the fusions I mostly like in the DBZ Story. Hope you like them [size=5][url="http://dragonball.wikia.com/wiki/Gogeta"]Gogeta[/url][/size] [img]http://i.imgur.com/gKTJ2.jpg[/img] Known as the ultimate fusion, Gogeta is the result of a [url="http://dragonball.wikia.com/wiki/Fusion_Dance"]Fusion Dance[/url]. Sadly this fusion only lasts 30 minutes depending on the amount of Ki used. He only appears in the 12th DBZ movie - [url="http://dragonball.wikia.com/wiki/Dragon_Ball_Z:_Fusion_Reborn"]Fusion Reborn[/url]. With only one "finishing move" he is able to eliminate [url="http://dragonball.wikia.com/wiki/Janemba"]Janemba[/url]. [url="http://dragonball.wikia.com/wiki/Vegito"][size=5]Vegito[/size][/url] [img]http://i.imgur.com/MUIaS.jpg[/img] The strongest of all types of fusions Vegito is the result of the junction of two [url="http://dragonball.wikia.com/wiki/Potara"]Potara earrings[/url]. This is a permanent fusion. He appears in the [url="http://dragonball.wikia.com/wiki/Fusion_Saga"]Fusion Saga[/url]. He faces [url="http://dragonball.wikia.com/wiki/Super_Buu"]Super Buu[/url] and it's clearly visible that Vegito is far more powerful than Buu. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KAX Ko Kitty KAX Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 o nice, im also a DBZ fan so i did some of my own as well. I see how you have the decrease fit in as the time limit for Gogeta to fit the story, Smart move and well thought up. Also seeing how he earrings are permanent, sacrificing life points as in giving up two lives to fit one. These aren't randomly done. Must have had some thought before being made. For both i gotta give a 8.7 for them. [img]http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/1782/428072.jpg[/img] [img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/1782/428072.jpg[/img] Rate mine plz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonstone Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 I like all 4 cards just as much 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PetkanSofian Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 The fusions are very well made. I really like how you tried to recreate them from the actual show in cards for a different card game. And it works. Very good. 5/5 PS: Dbz fan here. Not that it matters, just sayin' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fabiulu Posted June 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 [quote name='PetkanSofian' timestamp='1308068838' post='5282715'] The fusions are very well made. I really like how you tried to recreate them from the actual show in cards for a different card game. And it works. Very good. 5/5 PS: Dbz fan here. Not that it matters, just sayin' [/quote] Thanks for the feedback [img]http://public.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/laugh.gif[/img][quote name='KAX Ko Kitty KAX' timestamp='1308038920' post='5282232'] o nice, im also a DBZ fan so i did some of my own as well. I see how you have the decrease fit in as the time limit for Gogeta to fit the story, Smart move and well thought up. Also seeing how he earrings are permanent, sacrificing life points as in giving up two lives to fit one. These aren't randomly done. Must have had some thought before being made. For both i gotta give a 8.7 for them. [img]http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/1782/428072.jpg[/img] [img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/1782/428072.jpg[/img] Rate mine plz [/quote] The pic of the Buu card is really amazing and has a great quality, as for the effect, it's good but I think you should nerf the additional ATK points. An effect like that fits very well on [url="http://dragonball.wikia.com/wiki/Broly"]Broly[/url] [img]http://public.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 Okay more dbz cards in the popculture section...great. Anyways lets start this review. The OCG is wrong for both cards but I'm really tired from this long walk I had and the first cards beginning effect sounds so weird, same with the second cards's effect at the end. (I know I should know how to fix this but this may sound too weird to fix or I'm just lazy.) For the first card itself it seems pretty underpowered since it really has no use except for its high ATK which decreases slowly anyways. The second card is just as much underpowered as the first, same ATK but you lose Life Points. Right now I would not run these in a deck. Maybe you should add more to each cards effect to make it actually useful. But I must say unlike some other threads members made dbz cards on you were one of the few to take your time and find decent images so gratz to you. My final rate is 5.2/10 (The bonus .2 is for find decent pics.) If you ever get to update these the main thing is to try to make these cards actually useful. EDIT:Also a reminder do not post cards in a thread that is not yours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fabiulu Posted June 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 [quote name='Home Slice' timestamp='1308439784' post='5293722'] Okay more dbz cards in the popculture section...great. Anyways lets start this review. The OCG is wrong for both cards but I'm really tired from this long walk I had and the first cards beginning effect sounds so weird, same with the second cards's effect at the end. (I know I should know how to fix this but this may sound too weird to fix or I'm just lazy.) For the first card itself it seems pretty underpowered since it really has no use except for its high ATK which decreases slowly anyways. The second card is just as much underpowered as the first, same ATK but you lose Life Points. Right now I would not run these in a deck. Maybe you should add more to each cards effect to make it actually useful. But I must say unlike some other threads members made dbz cards on you were one of the few to take your time and find decent images so gratz to you. My final rate is 5.2/10 (The bonus .2 is for find decent pics.) If you ever get to update these the main thing is to try to make these cards actually useful. EDIT:Also a reminder do not post cards in a thread that is not yours. [/quote] Well, thank for the comment for starters [img]http://public.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif[/img] I don't know if you have followed the DBZ story, but I tried to make the Gogeta effect look like what happens in the anime. In the anime he's the last resort to beat the enemy and then the fusion ends. In the card I tried to make him somehow powerful but his energy downgrades as the battle flows. Maybe I should reduce the ATK and DEF points reduced per turn? As for Vegito, he is as powerful as Gogeta but since his fusion is permanent I had to come up with something for him to look somehow alike with Gogeta... Reduce his Life Points tributed per turn? If the effect still dumb then I should reformulate another effect [img]http://public.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/wacko.gif[/img] Anyway thanks for the feedback [img]http://public.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/wink.gif[/img] We learn with our errors [img]http://public.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/tongue.gif[/img]! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 I haven't seen most of the dbz story but I know some. For Gogeta I understand what your saying and I think the effect does fit him. But right now I'm seeing much of a point of using him. What I'm trying to say from my first post is that you should add on to the effect so card is actually useful in a away.I assume you know a lot about dbz, so use that knowledge to add on to the card or if you really do not want to do that I suggest making some support cards then.(Same with Vegito) Yes we all do learn from our errors and I'm glad you agree unlike others who argue back when you review there cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fabiulu Posted November 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2011 Next time I'll follow some of the advices given Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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