Just Crouton Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 [IMG]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/CloudfleetSkyCommander-1.jpg[/IMG] You can discard Machine-Type monster(s) whose total Levels equal 6 or more to Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard. Once per turn, while you control a face-up "Cloudfleet" monster other than "Cloudfleet Sky Commander", you can select 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls and destroy it. [IMG]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/CloudfleetSkyPaladin.jpg[/IMG] [color="#FF8C00"][b]Cloudfleet Sky Paladin[/b][/color] If this card attacks an opponent's monster, this card gains 400 ATK during the Damage Step only. If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, until your next Standby Phase, this card's ATK becomes 500. When another monster you control is attacked, you must switch this card to Defense Position, then your opponent must attack this card instead. [IMG]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/CloudfleetAirShield.jpg[/IMG] [color="#FF8C00"][b]Cloudfleet Air Shield[/b][/color] This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When another monster you control is attacked, you must switch this card to Defense Position, then your opponent must attack this card instead. During the End Phase of an opponent's turn that this card battled, destroy it. [IMG]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/CloudfleetStormFlyer.jpg[/IMG] [color="#FF8C00"][b]Cloudfleet Storm Flyer[/b][/color] When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Cloudfleet" monster from your Deck. This card gains 200 ATK for each face-up "Cloudfleet" monster on the field. [IMG]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/CloudfleetScout-1.jpg[/IMG] [color="#FF8C00"][b]Cloudfleet Scout[/b][/color] When this card you control is destroyed by battle and sent to your Graveyard, you can add any "Cloudfleet Scout"(s) from your Deck to your hand. When your opponent's monster declares an attack, you can remove this card from play. During the End Phase, Special Summon this card that was removed from play by this effect. [IMG]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/GiantFortressUTOPIA.jpg[/IMG] [color="#C0C0C0"][b]Giant Fortress UTOPIA[/b][/color] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters If this card is in Attack Position, destroy this card. All face-up "Cloudfleet" monsters you control gain ATK equal to half this card's ATK. When you take Effect Damage, negate that damage and have this card gain ATK equal to that damage. Once per turn, during your Draw Phase, when you draw a "Cloudfleet" monster, you can draw 1 more card by showing it to your opponent. [IMG]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/CloudGate.jpg[/IMG] [color="#00FF00"][b]Cloud Gate[/b][/color] Tribute 1 "Cloudfleet" monster to select 2 cards on the field. Return them to the owner's deck. You cannot attack this turn. [IMG]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/SkyTactics.jpg[/IMG] [color="#FF00FF"][b]Sky Tactics[/b][/color] Select 2 Level 4 or lower "Cloudfleet" monsters from your Graveyard and Special Summon them in face-up Defense Position. At the End Phase of the turn, take damage equal to the combined ATK of those 2 monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 On "Cloudfleet Sky Commander", his effect involves "Cloudfleet Sky Figher" and you have no such card posted. Other than that, I really like this card. On "Cloudfleet Sky Paladin" I think his last effect could be reworded to be much shorter... try "When another monster you control is selected as an attack target, change this card to Defense Position and change the target to this card." - Pretty good card, when he attacks another lvl 4 or lower monster he is almost guaranteed a kill, but that makes him very vulnerable for attack next turn. For "Cloudfleet Air Shield" I think you should make the same changes I suggested on the previous card. Also this card seems a bit UP, try changing its DEF to 2000, it may then prove to be a little more useful. "Cloudfleet Storm Flyer" is a very simple and effective support card for your archetype. Hard to really praise this card, but there are no complaints here either. For "Cloudfleet Scout", I don't understand part of its effect... (the bolded section) "When this card you control is destroyed by battle and sent to your Graveyard, you can add any "Cloudfleet Scout"(s) from your Deck to your hand. When your opponent's monster declares an attack [b]you can select it,[/b] then remove this card from play. During the End Phase, Special Summon this card that was removed from play by this effect." On "Giant Fortress UTOPIA" I find that he is quite OP, his effect to increase "Cloudfleet" monsters ATK is very high when he is first summoned, plus it has the potential to increase if you would take effect damage (or if you modify its ATK with Spell or Trap cards). Also you can draw an extra card if you draw a "Cloudfleet" monster. I would lower its ATK from 1400 to 800 (or even 600) as a drawback. Also, I think part of its effect should read "When you [b]would[/b] take Effect Damage, negate..." As for "Cloud Gate" I find nothing wrong with it, very balanced and could prove quite useful. On "Sky Tactics", its effect to Special Summon 2 monsters could prove very useful, but the drawback to take that much damage seems like a bit much. Change it so that you take 1500 damage instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Very decent Set. and yeah it is pretty unique 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Just Crouton Posted June 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 [quote name='Manpole' timestamp='1308022191' post='5281921'] On "Cloudfleet Sky Commander", his effect involves "Cloudfleet Sky Figher" and you have no such card posted. Other than that, I really like this card. For "Cloudfleet Scout", I don't understand part of its effect... (the bolded section) "When this card you control is destroyed by battle and sent to your Graveyard, you can add any "Cloudfleet Scout"(s) from your Deck to your hand. When your opponent's monster declares an attack [b]you can select it,[/b] then remove this card from play. During the End Phase, Special Summon this card that was removed from play by this effect." [/quote] Sky Fighter is a typo. Fixing. Scout's grammar is fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen-Psi Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Oh man pics from duel masters, haven't seen those in FOREVER!!!!! I thought the game had something going but it just still didn't get enough notice like yugioh, so sad. But as for your cards go they are great! 8.7/10 Live on duel masters, live on!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Sky Tactics almost seems to burn you too much for Storm Flyer, I think you should have written the 2nd sentence 1st and the 1st sentence 2nd 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1308037085' post='5282215'] for Storm Flyer, I think you should have written the 2nd sentence 1st and the 1st sentence 2nd [/quote] I agree, it sounds much better changed around like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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