Dr.FeelGood Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 [img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/7783/383147.jpg[/img] LORE: If you have 4 or less monsters on the field you may normal summon this monster without tribute summoning. This monsters ATK is inreased by 1000 points per monster on the field.As long as this Face-up monster remains on the field Fiend-type monsters cannot be affected by magic cards or trap cards(excluding this monster).All non Fiend-type monsters ATK are decreased by 300 points per X amount of stars on the card.For each Fiend-type monster in your graveyard this monster can ATK in the same turn. If your life points are lower than 8000 this monster cannot be destroted by battle. this is a monster I decided to make for no reason he is really oped but wouldn't he be helpful in a duel please Rate/Comment/Fix's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 OP. OP. OP. Lots of errors down to no spacing after a sentence, misspelled words, missing punctuations, non-capitalized words (that need capitalized) and just plain ocg errors. Make your cards slower and pay attention to what you are typing. Look at other "real cards" or other cards posted in this section for help on card grammer. Also, this being the realistic cards section, make the card useful but not this OP. Good luck in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen-Psi Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Op'ed much, and loads of errors. Can't call it beast when it is just ridiculous with power and problems. 4/10, I might grade it lower, but don't want to be harsh about it because I believe you can improve. Why don't you take some time-out to work on your cards grammar. When you fix a few things then I'll change the rate but for now this is what you get. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 way too easily summoned the last effect is completely unnecessary, it's OPed enough as it is 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PetkanSofian Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 I think its very good, only the last 2 effects over-power him. If they are removed i can imagine this Monster in a duel. 4/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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