PetkanSofian Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 [center]I made these and i think of doing a whole set. What do you think? [img]http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/1891/431281.jpg[/img] Effect: 3 Turns after this card's activation all Monsters on the field are removed from play. Players can pay the same number of Life Points as the ATK of their Monster(s) to have them remain on the field. (The Player decides how many Monsters he wishes to save.) When this card's effect has been resolved, destroy it and remove it from play. [img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/1891/431281.jpg[/img] Effect: Select and Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type Monster from your Graveyard to your side of the field in Attack Position and halve his ATK. When that Monster battles with an opponent Monster, if your Monster is destroyed remove it and your opponent's Monster from play. [img]http://img818.imageshack.us/img818/1891/431281.jpg[/img] Effect: Every time this Card attacks your opponent Directly, randomly discard 1 card from your opponent's hand.[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 [font="Century Gothic"][color="#2F4F4F"][center][b]The first card is extremely original IMO. But when you said 'wishes to save' in the effect I think it should be 'wishes to remain on the field'. The second card is also original and has a nice pic, but it and the first card are both possibly OP to a minor extent. For this card maybe add a cost like 'Discard 1 card and Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster' etc. Etc. The third card is fine in terms of balance. But it's a bit bland... Anyways Great cards overall ^^. 9/10 P.S. Removed from play is now banished.[/b][/center][/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 "Reaper Final Hours" needs to specify at what point in 3 turns its effect activates, it could read: "On your opponents 3rd Standby Phase after this card's activation, all Monsters on the field are removed from play. Players can pay..." (Also, I don't think "Monsters" needs to be capitalized) On "Skeleton Resurrection" I think his effect needs reworded from "monster" to "this card" like this: "When the selected Monster battles with an opponent Monster, if the selected Monster is destroyed, remove it and your opponent's Monster from play." (Again, I don't think "Monster" needs capitalization) On "Reaper Girl 1" I don't think "Card" or "Directly" need capitalization either. Overall, the cards are pretty good. I'm interested in how you plan on making these cards work together in a set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PetkanSofian Posted June 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Thank you very much, guys! I'll fix them for the set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Reaper Girl's effect is too plain, you should give an alternative in case your opponent has no cards to discard Skeleton Resurrection's effect is Oped because your opponent will lose his/her monster one way or another, might want to adjust that 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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