Peace In Despair Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 [center][font="Garamond"]This is the first card I created, changing quite a bit. It is also the ONLY card I have created, so.... here it is[/font]: [spoiler=Brightning][img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/5979/430892.jpg[/img][spoiler=Lore]When this face-up card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Dragon-Type monster from your hand to your side of the field in face up attack position. Trap cards can not be activated at this time.[/spoiler][/spoiler][/center] [center][font="Garamond"]It's a dragon support.... Tell me what you think : P[/font][/center] Caught.... should "one" be 1 ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Yes, one should be 1, and four should be 4. Also you put "When this card face-up..." and it needs to be "[b]When this face-up card[/b]..." and on the type, it needs to be [b]Dragon-Type[/b]. Other than that, I like it. If anything, it could use an ATK boost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peace In Despair Posted June 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Thanks for the feedback, I changed it It doesn't have an attack boost because it's supposed to be gotten rid of.... but not a bad idea.... Should I make more dragon support stuff, or other support, or rethink the whole idea? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 given that it supports Dragon-types, I'm surprised you didn't say itself is a dragon type too should be fine for effect in the quick summoning, I like it 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peace In Despair Posted June 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Thanks Would it be better as a dragon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 face-up Attack Position, Trap Cards. Other OCG is fine, Maybe change the last part to "Trap Cards cannot be activated until the end of that turn." Just suggestion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peace In Despair Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Alright, thanks for the feedback. I'll change it later, it is my first card, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
macload6 Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 The card is great .... i wish you luck with design or creation cards anyway visit my profile and look my creation of my own cards and tell me is it good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 [quote name='Peace In Despair' timestamp='1308088795' post='5283498'] Thanks Would it be better as a dragon? [/quote] It certainly would be, you just then have to balance it more since it's multiple types now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peace In Despair Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 So, in the effect, would I put: This card is treated as a Dragon-type? Or just leave out Thunder entirely? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 personally I see it better as a dragon type and you can cut out thunder completely Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peace In Despair Posted June 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 Alright, when I get better I'll redo this.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 Very nice for your first card! Pic looks great. OCG has been fixed. Give it a little ATK boost and it's great. 9/10 Very nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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