Legiit Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 this is my new set. Its called Prototype. Enjoy the cards and plz answer if i shud continue or not.[Spoiler=Monsters] [img]http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/9681/48716.jpg[/img] [img]http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/1765/48716f.jpg[/img] [img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/9681/48716.jpg[/img] [img]http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/9681/48716.jpg[/img] [img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/8806/48716c.jpg[/img] [img]http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/7120/48716w.jpg[/img] [img]http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/9681/48716.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore for Prototype Beast] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 "Prototype" monsters you control. If this card is targeted by a Spell or Trap card, Pay 500 Life Points to negate the effect and destroy that card. If this card is targeted by a Effect Monster's effect, Banish 1 Level 4 or higher monster in your Graveyard, and negate the effect. If that monster was a Machine-Type destroy this card. If that monster was a Non Machine-Type monster, destroy that card. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [Spoiler=Spell and Traps] [img]http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/2087/48716m.jpg[/img] [img]http://img813.imageshack.us/img813/329/48716i.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [Spoiler= Synchro Monsters] [img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/7245/48716l.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore] This card gains 100 ATK for every Machine-Type monster in your Graveyard. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1Level 4 or lower Machine-Type monster with "Prototype" in its name, from your Graveyard. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legiit Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 plz if u have viewed my set plz leave a comment or poll answer Please if you are going to vote for my set at least leave a comment behind stating your decision on what reason you chose. Thank you. UPDATED* ADDED LORES IF U CANT READ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
duel tester Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 these cards are neat but i need to see more monsters spells and traps in order to give a rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legiit Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 [quote name='duel tester' timestamp='1308104259' post='5284045'] these cards are neat but i need to see more monsters spells and traps in order to give a rating. [/quote] thats why i was wondering if i should still continue with this set or not, if i should then yes of course i will add cards ty for the comment though, i highly appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Hero: This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set if you control 1 or more Fiend-Type monsters. If this card is Special Summoned, decrease the Att of this monster by 200. If your opponent controls 1 or more Fiend-Type monsters, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Fiend-Type monster [b](From where?)[/b] and increase its ATK by 200. If this card is destroyed by battle by a Fiend-Type monster, decrease the ATK of that monster by 100 after the Damage Step. Cyclops: If this card is [b]used as[/b] a Synchro Material Monster for a Machine-Type Synchro Monster, increase the ATK of that monster by 500. If your opponent controls a Machine-Type monster this card cannot be used to Synchro Summon. When this card is sent to the Graveyard by an Effect, Special Summon 1 Level 2 or lower Tuner Monster from your Deck in Defense Position. Power-Up: [b]Equip only to a "Prototype" monster[/b]. [b]The equipped monster gains 300 ATK[/b]. If the equipped monster destroys a monster [b]by battle[/b] and sends it to the Graveyard, draw [b]and reveal[/b] 1 card. If the card you drew was an Equip Spell Card, destroy 1 Level 5 or lower monster your opponent controls. If your opponent has a Field Spell Card, destroy this card and decrease the ATK of the equipped monster by 300. I can't tell on Power-Up if the ATK is supposed to go to normal or loose 300 until the equipped monster leaves the field. The fixes are in bold (old OCG). Bold is fixes, except on the first one. 3/10 The theme needs a focus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legiit Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 [quote name='Rusty Shackleford' timestamp='1308105253' post='5284089'] Hero: This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set if you control 1 or more Fiend-Type monsters. If this card is Special Summoned, decrease the Att of this monster by 200. If your opponent controls 1 or more Fiend-Type monsters, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Fiend-Type monster [b](From where?)[/b] and increase its ATK by 200. If this card is destroyed by battle by a Fiend-Type monster, decrease the ATK of that monster by 100 after the Damage Step. Cyclops: If this card is [b]used as[/b] a Synchro Material Monster for a Machine-Type Synchro Monster, increase the ATK of that monster by 500. If your opponent controls a Machine-Type monster this card cannot be used to Synchro Summon. When this card is sent to the Graveyard by an Effect, Special Summon 1 Level 2 or lower Tuner Monster from your Deck in Defense Position. Power-Up: [b]Equip only to a "Prototype" monster[/b]. [b]The equipped monster gains 300 ATK[/b]. If the equipped monster destroys a monster [b]by battle[/b] and sends it to the Graveyard, draw [b]and reveal[/b] 1 card. If the card you drew was an Equip Spell Card, destroy 1 Level 5 or lower monster your opponent controls. If your opponent has a Field Spell Card, destroy this card and decrease the ATK of the equipped monster by 300. I can't tell on Power-Up if the ATK is supposed to go to normal or loose 300 until the equipped monster leaves the field. The fixes are in bold (old OCG). Bold is fixes, except on the first one. 3/10 The theme needs a focus. [/quote] [font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2]ok i made new cards and there is a theme. They are like Robot-Type monsters that target Equip Spells and support eachother. For Hero that was simply a mistake which i must change. Thank you for your comment although it seemed a little harsh, ill change up some of the cards.[/size][/font]Updated I added 3 new cards to the set.Updated "Prototype Hero". Some errors with his effect was fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Why's Hero a Fiend then? Also, I would suggest re-reading Scanner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legiit Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 what do you mean re-reading Scanner? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legiit Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Defender is a bit too powerful the Prototype monster you select has to pay too little for the loss of your opponent's monster make the cost bigger 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 Prototype Hero:This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set if you control 1 or more Fiend-Type monsters. If this card is Special Summoned, decrease the ATK of this monster by 200.[b] If your opponent controls 1 or more Fiend-Type monsters, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Fiend-Type monster and increase its ATK by 200[/b]. If this card is destroyed by battle, by a Fiend-Type monster, decrease the ATK of that monster by 100 after the Damage Step. >>YOu should make it once per turn, WTH if its not once per turn Prototype Cyclops:If this card is a Synchro Material Monster for a Machine-Type Synchro Monster, increase the ATK of that monster by 500. If your opponent controls a Machine-Type monster this card cannot be used to Synchro Summon. When this card is sent to the Graveyard by a [b]card effect[/b], Special Summon 1 Level 2 or lower Tuner Monster from your Deck in Defense Position. >>This one i like it and yeah its damn useful Prototype Power-Up:This card can only be equipped to monsters who have "Prototype" in their name. Increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 300. If the equipped monster destroys a monster and sends it to the Graveyard, draw 1 card. If the card you drew was an Equip Spell Card, destroy 1 Level 5 or lower monster your opponent controls. If your opponent has a Field Spell Card, destroy this card and decrease the ATK of the equipped monster by 300 >>300 is too little. I'll raise out it until 500, even it can lowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legiit Posted June 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 guys for all your comments ty so much. I will make these changes soon. But for now wish me luck as i begin adding new cards now. I think ill make some more Spells or Traps.UPDATED** Added 4 new cards 1 Synchro, 2 Monsters, and 1 Spell Card. Sorry guys for the lack of spells and traps, cant find good pics but ill get to it later on. So feel free to comment i have made 4 new cards. Comments and Rates Highly appreciated. Thx to everyone who commented and rated on my set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legiit Posted June 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 Bump!! added new cards please comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neos the Ancient Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 Might want to fix effect of Prototype Angel, because with one in the Graveyard, and one on the field, you could create a neverending loop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legiit Posted June 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 ohh f***, thanks for that ill change it... but wanna rate my set and + rep for u for noticing that ty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 [quote name='Legiit' timestamp='1308253250' post='5288146'] Bump!! added new cards please comment [/quote] put a new next to the new added ones, makes it easier to find Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legiit Posted June 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 umm sure ill do that everytime i make new cards then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legiit Posted June 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 comment and rate plz bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 17, 2011 Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 personally I feel Prototype Angel's effect is good, but not OPed and that makes it UPed, because most synchros are supposed to be OPed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ancient gem master Posted June 17, 2011 Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 very good set definitlly continue with it even devolop your own structure deck out of them 9.8/10 so far Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legiit Posted June 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 ty bump again, and ill try to fix Guardian Angel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phœnīcius Infīnius VII Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 They look great IMO. And the pics... Are awesome I mean they seriously look like legit Yu-Gi-Oh! cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legiit Posted June 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 [quote name='SSxMINI LUCAS' timestamp='1308505872' post='5295437'] They look great IMO. And the pics... Are awesome I mean they seriously look like legit Yu-Gi-Oh! cards. [/quote] Wow that means alot to me ty so much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phœnīcius Infīnius VII Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 [quote name='Legiit' timestamp='1308506042' post='5295448'] Wow that means alot to me ty so much. [/quote] No prob man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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