The Borg Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 [img]http://img804.imageshack.us/img804/2520/189225.jpg[/img] The sneak preview card for a set I'm working on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legiit Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 good card i like the effect and the pic is good too. Your OCG however isnt good You should fix it up . id be happy to do it my self Effect: OCG FIX When your opponent Normal Summons a monster, pay 2000 Life Points and send 1 Warrior-Type monster you control to the Graveyard. Special Summon 1 "Black Rose Dragon" from your Extra Deck. This card gains 200 ATK. remember caps important copy and paste this effect trust me your OCG wud look better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Actually he might be using the newer OCG. He just needs to work on capitalization. Anyway, the effect is simple but good. Pic fits the card well. Kind of simple, but I'm the kind of guy that likes really complicated effects. Although I don't see much correlation between Black Rose and Warriors, 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 [quote name='Legiit' timestamp='1308099940' post='5283887'] good card i like the effect and the pic is good too. Your OCG however isnt good You should fix it up . id be happy to do it my self [/quote] He's using new OCG, so the only thing that's not correct is the capitalization of Life Points, Type and Extra Deck. Not sure if card is balanced or UP'd, because it can't use it's nuke, but it's an easy way to bring it out outside of Debris. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Thanks for the OCG capitalization tips. This is my first card in a while and yes, I'm using the new OCG. The whole warrior thing is to fit the pic and correlate with an archetype in set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 [quote name='Rusty Shackleford' timestamp='1308100358' post='5283896'] Thanks for the OCG capitalization tips. This is my first card in a while and yes, I'm using the new OCG. The whole warrior thing is to fit the pic and correlate with an archetype in set. [/quote] I see...I'll bump my rating to 9.5/10 then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Also, I'd like to note the reason why I put in that 200 Attack Gain. It's so Black Rose can beat Shi-En or Stardust. And Monarchs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legiit Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 my post has been up for 4 hours straight and no comments, would you guys mind commenting on my pics and voting for my poll? Thanks if you do this is highly appreciated and will be guaranteed 1 Positive Rep. <div><br></div><div><br></div> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lilm99 Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Like te effect and picture. Where did you get it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legiit Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/253192-my-new-set-3/ it gliched up here is the link sorry for the comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 [quote name='lilm99' timestamp='1308101406' post='5283941'] Like te effect and picture. Where did you get it? [/quote] Jazinkay's photobucket. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legiit Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Rusty, i would like to ask you, i cant find jazinkays photobucket anymore, mind sending me a link? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 http://s825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ He has a lot of good art, and that is just one of his albums. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legiit Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 ty alot man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lilm99 Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Thanks. Going to look now.9/10, by the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 except for the 200 atk, which is virtually nothing, everything else should be fine make the atk boost a bit bigger or something 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted June 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 The attack boost was literally put in just so it wouldn't be run over by Stardust and Shi-En. I didn't want you to have paid 2000 life for a rose that gets run over in 5 seconds. Though I may want to make the attack boost 500, to run over Scrap Dragon, Thought Ruler, and Trishula. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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