MidknightTheHedgehog Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 I want to know, is this card overpowered or is it just right. [img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/320/398973.jpg[/img] Vash Owns. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Can you post the lore/effect? i have a bad net Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lvl1hero Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 [quote][b]Zhao Yun - Shu[/b] --- [b]Lv8 Warrior / Ritual / Effect Monster[/b] --- [b]2500[/b]ATK/[b]3000[/b]DEF[quote]"this card is ritual summoned by playing the card Liu Chan's cry and tributing 2 cards. if 1 or both of those cards were peasants, raise this card's attack by 500 for each. if you only control this card, destroy 2 cards on your opponents side of the field."[/quote][/quote] ... [b]Zhao Yun - Shu[/b] is not really broken... well kinda... ... its effect though is not very clear... ... maybe... if you dont mind fixing the [u]OCG[/u] (original card grammar) of that card?... ... if you're having trouble you can look at real card's effects as a guide... ... or you can use this if you want: [quote][b]Zhao Yun - Shu[/b] --- [b]Lv8 Warrior / Ritual / Effect Monster[/b] --- [b][u](lower the ATK)[/u][/b]/[b][u](lower the DEF)[/u][/b][quote]"This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Liu Chan's Cry". If a "Peasant" was used as a tribute to summon this card, increase this card's ATK by 500 for each "Peasant". If you control no other cards besides this card, during your Main Phase, you can destroy up to 2 cards on your opponents side of the field.[/quote][/quote](my OCG isn't perfect but it'll be something like this for it to look more legit) ... of course... if you use the effect i showed... you'll have to create a [b]Liu Chan's Cry[/b] Ritual Spell Card and then state what [b]Liu Chan's Cry[/b] requires in order for you to actually summon [b]Zhao Yun - Shu[/b] onto the field... (in other words, [b]Liu Chan's Cry[/b] is where [i]this[/i] text appears: [i]"You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand."[/i] Though you'll probably have to fix the OCG here too if you want your card to look more legit) ... nice card though... ... and if its broken you asked?... yes... because its "only" (thats right... only) a Lv8 monster with the potential to reach like [b]3000+[/b] ATK easy with an effect that destroys more than 1 card on the field... ... but it really is just unclear on what the card does... ... its not that bad though really... i mean you might have to lower its ATK and maybe the DEF a lil or lower the ATK boost it gets when it gets Ritual Summon by using "Peasants" (i'm guessing its a name on a monster card?.. or is it a custom monster type) as a tribute... like lower it from 500 to 400?... other than that the destroying effect is okay... ... i've seen worse broken cards... [u]Overall Rating[/u]: [b]4/5[/b] (great card) xP [i](rated more on the creators creation, rather than the card itself)[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidknightTheHedgehog Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 4get it. I didn't know you have to be realistic. I mean this is YCM. but hey the guy who tries is always criticized. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LCÂ Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 The card is overpowered IMO. Maybe lowering the attack, raising the level or adding a restriction in the effect would help to make it balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 What do you mean by If you control this card , you can destroy 2 cards on the field? It should be limited once per turn and adding more drawback like paying 1500 Life PointsWhat do you mean by If you control this card , you can destroy 2 cards on the field? It should be limited once per turn and adding more drawback like paying 1500 Life Points Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidknightTheHedgehog Posted June 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 [quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1308189306' post='5286518'] What do you mean by If you control this card , you can destroy 2 cards on the field? It should be limited once per turn and adding more drawback like paying 1500 Life Points What do you mean by If you control this card , you can destroy 2 cards on the field? It should be limited once per turn and adding more drawback like paying 1500 Life Points [/quote] If it's the only card on the field destroy. the effect is only once[quote name='Inferno Knight LC' timestamp='1308178280' post='5286055'] The card is overpowered IMO. Maybe lowering the attack, raising the level or adding a restriction in the effect would help to make it balanced. [/quote] I thought about it. I is over powered I'll fix it right away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lvl1hero Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 [quote name='midknightthehedgehog' timestamp='1308168007' post='5285640'] 4get it. I didn't know you have to be realistic. I mean this is YCM. but hey the guy who tries is always criticized. [/quote] ... aw c'mon... dont put it that way... =P being [i]as[/i] realistic as we can with our cards is the only way for people to come to a point where creating Yugioh cards are fun... ... i mean... it wouldn't be much fun if people didn't have a limit on their cards right???... xP maybe you can think of it this way... ... if you're getting ratings that are like 7/10 ~ 9/10... thats freakin good enough!... ... any card rated 10/10 would mean that the other person himself/herself would've done the exact same thing and had probably wished it was his/her idea or creation... ... but the odds of finding another person who agrees with you completely on something like that are like 1/1000... ... and its not just for a strong card... ... people acknowledge even the weak cards as long as its balanced and useful... ... besides its a great card!... ... you can [b]definitely[/b] make it better... it just needs a fixing here and there... ... but of course... if you're satisfied with your card its alright... ... no one's gonna force you to change it into something you dont want it to be... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidknightTheHedgehog Posted June 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 [quote name='lvl1hero' timestamp='1308211619' post='5287023'] ... aw c'mon... dont put it that way... =P being [i]as[/i] realistic as we can with our cards is the only way for people to come to a point where creating Yugioh cards are fun... ... i mean... it wouldn't be much fun if people didn't have a limit on their cards right???... xP maybe you can think of it this way... ... if you're getting ratings that are like 7/10 ~ 9/10... thats freakin good enough!... ... any card rated 10/10 would mean that the other person himself/herself would've done the exact same thing and had probably wished it was his/her idea or creation... ... but the odds of finding another person who agrees with you completely on something like that are like 1/1000... ... and its not just for a strong card... ... people acknowledge even the weak cards as long as its balanced and useful... ... besides its a great card!... ... you can [b]definitely[/b] make it better... it just needs a fixing here and there... ... but of course... if you're satisfied with your card its alright... ... no one's gonna force you to change it into something you dont want it to be... [/quote] I know You didn't see my reply. You got good Idea's I'll take em. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El-Rrey Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 God, Zhao Yun lost his awesomeness. Otherwise, i have nothing special to say, just look above. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidknightTheHedgehog Posted June 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 [quote name='El-Rrey' timestamp='1308213360' post='5287037'] God, Zhao Yun lost his awesomeness. Otherwise, i have nothing special to say, just look above. [/quote] How did he lose his awesomeness? It's just an opinion. Even though I support your answer because in many ways your kinda right. But it can also go the other way. Thanks for posting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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