KayGee Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 This is the first card I have made. Any comments/feedback would be great, but not entirely necessary. It may seem a bit like Obelisk/Slipher though. OH, and I was working on a set, but I'm probably just going to change the Type and just keep the "Aether" in the name as a specification. [img]http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/7633/432291.jpg[/img] This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by removing from play 3 monsters you control. This card can negate the activation of spell cards and destroy them. Once per turn, you can remove from play 2 cards you control to select 1 card on the field, and destroy it. Once per game, you can remove from play this card from your side of the field to destroy all cards on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mors Secundis Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Don't Change the types, Its annoying unless they come in a set, this would be batter as a fairy or fiend. Also Post a Spoiler with the effect so I can scan it for errors, I cant read a god damn thing... As it stands I'll give you 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KayGee Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 [quote name='.:Sh@dow King:.' timestamp='1308165877' post='5285566'] Don't Change the types, Its annoying unless they come in a set, this would be batter as a fairy or fiend. Also Post a Spoiler with the effect so I can scan it for errors, I cant read a god damn thing... As it stands I'll give you 5/10. [/quote] Thanks for the feedback. I fixed some things, and the Aetherial" was only b/c I was bored and suprised there weren't any pre-chosen types. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 Divine Attribute should be followed by Divine - Beast Type. And remove that dcrease this card ATK, why? God supposed to be great. Other than is fine, and i love the idea 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KayGee Posted June 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 [quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1308188542' post='5286509'] Divine Attribute should be followed by Divine - Beast Type. And remove that dcrease this card ATK, why? God supposed to be great. Other than is fine, and i love the idea 9/10 [/quote] Thanks for the feedback, and I'll set about righting it. I guess I just constantly try to underpower things so nobody can say " Overpowered! Thats so cheap!" or anything like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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