Master White Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 [center]Okay, this is something I thought about, and I think some cards need some help and this creative way I think will seriously help the decks of others.... Should I make this into a Set of cards that aid other Archetypes? Thank you Mirror B, cad97, Tristan T, and ♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ for trying to help me, but Max ended up being the one I should have asked.... Max Darkness Effect Fix My Idea Judas' Template Renji's Attribute [img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/2710/soginakmeoffire.png[/img] [b]Lore[/b] [i]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except when your opponent activates a card effect that would destroy (a) card(s) on the field OR while your opponent controls (a) card(s) that would destroy (a) card(s) on the field. If this card is Special Summoned when your opponent activates an card effect, you can discard 3 cards to negate the effect and remove it from play.[/i] Please Rate/Hate/Comment/Whatever.... Constructive Criticism only please.... [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 why discard 3 cards? That seems a little bit TOO high a price, especially since you can only use it upon special summoning 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1308177664' post='5286021'] why discard 3 cards? That seems a little bit TOO high a price, especially since you can only use it upon special summoning 7/10 [/quote] Really, i thought it would be kinda powerful and spammy with any less, but okay, i can make it less, what should it be....3,2, or 1, but keep in mind you can only negate when it is Special Summoned. But you can still Special Summon it even if the opponent just controls stardust dragon..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 yeah well we know Stardust is OPed, but it applies to more than just it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1308178710' post='5286074'] yeah well we know Stardust is OPed, but it applies to more than just it [/quote] True True....I guess I could at least make it 1400 ATK and 1800 DEF so then it can be brought out by sangan.... I was more of thinking this card would be broke b/c it can negate BRD and be Special Summoned.....that's the 3 card reason.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This Account is Unplayable Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 "a" shouldn't be in brackets, unless some of the recent changes state otherwise, but it appears you're using older OCG, so it shouldn't be in brackets, only the "s" after card should be. Also, in the last sentence, it should be "a card" not "an card". Otherwise, I've already told you how much I like the idea, but I really think you should only be discarding 1 or 2 cards most, or else there's virtually no reason to run it over something like Divine Wrath. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 [quote name='Tristan T. Taylor' timestamp='1308179423' post='5286098'] "a" shouldn't be in brackets, unless some of the recent changes state otherwise, but it appears you're using older OCG, so it shouldn't be in brackets, only the "s" after card should be. I made it b/c it just don't sound right if I don't, for instant, read these and tell me it sounds right to you? [b]This card cannot be Special Summoned except when your opponent activates a card effect that would destroy a cards on the field OR while your opponent controls a card that would destroy a cards on the field. If this card is Special Summoned when your opponent activates an card effect, you can discard 3 cards to negate the effect and remove it from play. Kinda off grammer if I take the brackets off the "A"s, doesn't. I may be wrong, but I'm just stating what would be obvious IMO... [/b] Also, in the last sentence, it should be "a card" not "an card". Otherwise, I've already told you how much I like the idea, but I really think you should only be discarding 1 or 2 cards most, or else there's virtually no reason to run it over something like Divine Wrath. [/quote] Okay, Okay, I'll make changes and use 1 card..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 discard 2 cards is enough. I never gonna use this if it is 3 cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 [quote name='Master White' timestamp='1308179145' post='5286086'] True True....I guess I could at least make it 1400 ATK and 1800 DEF so then it can be brought out by sangan.... I was more of thinking this card would be broke b/c it can negate BRD and be Special Summoned.....that's the 3 card reason.... [/quote] well since you mentioned Sangan, just how popular is that card still? (since it's old) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1308190809' post='5286615'] well since you mentioned Sangan, just how popular is that card still? (since it's old) [/quote] It's old, but nevertheless still quite usable. @ White - Now that you've decided to make the cost 1 card, I think this is an awesome card! Congratulations on making a card (that I consider) "balanced" in the TCG world Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 Discard 1 card and this card Special Summoned, also negate the effect? No Zex, card still need a balance touch. It is 2 cards IMO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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