My first card

[Veniet]

This is my first card. I am new to this site, but I am familiar with the game and I actually play. I'd liker err, advice along the way, as I want to make a new series here

[img]http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/3091/432697.jpg[/img]

[newhat]

The lore should be:
[quote]This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Leaves Dancing". If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, you can change the battle position of 1 of your opponent's face-up monsters. That monster must remain in that Battle Position until the end of your opponent's 2nd Standby Phase after this effect is activated.[/quote]
The data on Tributes goes on the Ritual Spell Card.

The ATK is acceptable. Nothing's too amazing. Unless the Ritual Spell Card does something interesting (like Dawn of the Herald), there's not much reason to use this card.

[Veniet]

[quote name='newhat' timestamp='1308183590' post='5286296']
The lore should be:

The data on Tributes goes on the Ritual Spell Card.

The ATK is acceptable. Nothing's too amazing. Unless the Ritual Spell Card does something interesting (like Dawn of the Herald), there's not much reason to use this card.
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Thank you very much for the help. Hmm... I will take in mind teh layout. Might take getting used to. Thanks again : )

[ragnarok1945]

this isn't a real ritual at all

I see no ritual spell

[MibeR]

This goes to Pop Culture ,

y know this is Erza Scarlet in Fairy Tail.

3000 DEF is rather too much, and the effect is very unused. Since it only change Battle Position. Gaap Does better