Rehva Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 [center][IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/300w1oz.jpg[/IMG] [spoiler=Effect] [size="1"][b]This card cannot be Special Summoned. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can select 1 level 4 or lower monster on your opponent's Field and equip it to this card. This card gains ATK equal half of the monster's DEF. If this card were to be destroyed, you can discard 1 card from your hand to destroy the monster equipped to this card.[/b][/size] [/spoiler][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 Not sure on OCG, someone else can do that. Pic looks great. Effect is good. Balanced. Overall very nice! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted June 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 I got lazy with the effect . lul, i wasted more time editing it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 shame you chose to boost def and not atk 1900 is weak as hell for lv6, you should have done that instead 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted June 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 *Facepalm* it was suppost to be the monsters DEF into his ATK. faail! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neos the Ancient Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 SHINY. 10000/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 17, 2011 Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 You forgot instead at the last sentence. Decent idea but explosively useful which i like it 9.8/10 , level = Level. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen-Psi Posted June 17, 2011 Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 This card looks like a mini boss in games or obstacle before you get to the final boss, thats good. Should have made it increase atk because this card has alot for potential but oh well. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted June 17, 2011 Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 Seems all right. Here's altered lore: [quote]...This card gains ATK equal to half of the equipped monster's DEF... ...If this card would be destroyed, you can discard 1 card to destroy the equipped monster instead.[/quote] "Instead" is key. Otherwise it's OK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 17, 2011 Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 [quote name='Raze.' timestamp='1308259562' post='5288458'] *Facepalm* it was suppost to be the monsters DEF into his ATK. faail! [/quote] good, you modified the effect, NOW I can raise the rate to 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted June 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marcher boyz Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 [quote]If this card were to be destroyed, you can discard 1 card from your hand to destroy the monster equipped to this card.[/quote] this is missing an instead somewhere monarchs exist/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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