MibeR Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 [center][img]http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/7994/203203.jpg[/img] Level 6 2100 / 1500 [i]When you control a face up "Elemental HERO Neos": You can Special Summon this card (from your hand). When this card is Special Summoned this way: Both players can Special Summon 1 Level 4 monster from their respective Graveyard. During your third Standby Phase after this card is successfully Summoned on the field: You can add 1 card from the bottom of your Deck to your hand. Then shuffle your Deck. This card gains 100 ATK for each Set card on the field. You can destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card you control: Target 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls; destroy it.[/i] All critism get [color="#00FF00"]+rep[/color]. Also all [color="#00FF00"]+re[/color]p for me get a [color="#00FF00"]rep[/color] in return [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phœnīcius Infīnius VII Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 When this card is Special Summoned [b]by it's own effect[/b] During your third Standby Phase after this card is successfully Summoned [b]to[/b] the field: You can add 1 card from the bottom of your Deck to your hand. <<<That sentence seems like it's got some incorrect... something... But it says " card from the bottom of your Deck " that could be anywhere. I just don't think that it's descriptive enough. Also why did you spotlight the word "HERO"? In conclusion this seems like quite a valid card. Good work. edit: Oh yeah and I forgot 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 IMO "this way" is the correct, HERO is new OCG rules, thanks for commenting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phœnīcius Infīnius VII Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 New OCG rules? Um what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 Check the top Thread of this section . It is pinned, it is the rule of new OCG. Konami release it remove from play is now banish All Elemental, Evil, Destiny is now HERO monsters. etc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Time Psyduck Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 When you control a face up "Elemental HERO Neos": You can Special Summon this card (from your hand). When this card is Special Summoned this way: Both players can Special Summon 1 Level 4 monster from their respective Graveyard. During your third Standby Phase after this card is successfully Summoned: You can add 1 card from the bottom of your Deck to your hand. This card gains 100 ATK for each Set card on the field. You can destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card you control: Target 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls; destroy it. The mention of shuffling the deck after taking the bottom card probably shouldn't be there. In theory you shouldn't need to, because you shouldn't be using the effect to sneak a look at what's now at the bottom of your deck, and shuffling hasn't been mentioned in the ocg for a while. Neither should it read "Summoned on the field." There's no-where else it can be summoned to. If you mean that it still has to be around when the effect goes off, then it should probably be: "When this card is face-up on the field, during your third Standby Phase..." On the whole it looks good. Requiring Neos seems a bit too specific. Perhaps make it an E Hero fusion, so it can be used in E HERO decks that don't use Neos, or at least let it use Neos Fusions in case you get it after you fused Neos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 I want to make partner for Neos. That's all, If it is Fusion Neos. Maybe it is considered OPed, so yeah. Thanks you for suggestion, Waiting someone, if they will to change it to Fusion then i'll change it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 Bumpidity Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2011 bump, anyone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
david ice Posted June 20, 2011 Report Share Posted June 20, 2011 nice card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2011 Any review? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 20, 2011 Report Share Posted June 20, 2011 The pic and name match. Both are good. I know it's correct but the "HERO" just looks odd to me. Maybe I'm just not used to it yet. It seems balanced to me, I don't see anything that would break it. OCG seems good, but Time Psyduck is correct, you don't need the "Then shuffle your deck." in there. Overall it looks great. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2011 Thank you for commenting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MystirMeme Posted June 21, 2011 Report Share Posted June 21, 2011 Wow, this card is really good. I dont think I can find anything wrong with it (other than it's reliance on Neos as it's easiest method to get on the field). Maybe reduce the last effect to Once per turn. Other than that, really good card. 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2011 Thinking about limit it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted June 21, 2011 Report Share Posted June 21, 2011 Well needing neos isn't the worst drawback since you can just use neos alius effect and most hero users use that. So I like all of its effects and since its light its good fuel for shining. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2011 Thank you dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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