The Maniac Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 [font="Impact"][size="5"]Hello once more time, people. Today also I will show us a new card I wrotten. The artwork was taken from the user HP Doom (Nice work of this master of illustrations) and this card is so special and I believe it haves an original effect. Check out and see yourself! [font="Times New Roman"] End Phase Dragon Level 1 DARK Dragon ATK/300 DEF/200 (From Max Daemon Starter Deck [Soon I will create a fanfic] 007) [img]http://img848.imageshack.us/img848/786/425267.jpg[/img] LORE: You can only activate this effect during your opponent's Battle Phase. Banish this card from your hand to negate the rest of your opponent's turn. This effect can only be activated at once and you cannot activate it at the rest of the duel. I know about the picture trouble. Later I will fix this errors, the dimmensions are too small. Enjoy, suggest, vote, like or hate this card! Your votes and rating are very important to me! Also you can be my friend, you are welcome! And... *{* Thanks for reading my post [/font][/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Ninja Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 The picture is kinda blurry. I think what your going for here is to skip your opponent's battle phase...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.A._Sakuyamon Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 It's pretty overpowered. Negating an opponents turn should be as easy as a discard. Then with it's second effect you can neg 2 more turns with ease if you know what your doing. Return from a different dimenions would make it broken to hell. Use "Allure of darkness" get your draw & remove that from play. Set "Return from a Different Dimension". proceed to do 2 free turns. Activate your set "RfaDD" to get "EP Dragon" on your field. At end phase it get banished again and you have 2 more free turns. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 Using certain card combination would make this card freaking op'ed, I mean some kind of strategy like remove from play strategy that includes discard strategy... If I get the point, but you mean by Negate your opponent's turn, what? skip his/her turn? so it's really a op'ed card, since your opponent couldn't do summon or set any card. ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Maniac Posted June 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 [quote name='Shadow Ninja' timestamp='1308451831' post='5294192'] The picture is kinda blurry. I think what your going for here is to skip your opponent's battle phase...? [/quote] Imagine what you can do with this card: You can have 2 Battle Phases, draw 2 times, summon 2 monsters and gain 1 opponen't turn. And with his 2nd effect, many posibilities increase. As below has said, is a owerpowered dragon, it's the reason i will turn this card to a limited card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 [quote name='Luis Edmundo' timestamp='1308453012' post='5294230'] Imagine what you can do with this card: You can have 2 Battle Phases, draw 2 times, summon 2 monsters and gain 1 opponen't turn. And with his 2nd effect, many posibilities increase. As below has said, is a owerpowered dragon, it's the reason i will turn this card to a limited card. [/quote] It would be insta-banned my friend. Yata Garasu was banned because it was easy to skip your opponent's Draw Phase. This is just no. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Maniac Posted June 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 Well, all are right; it's a overpowered card. It's reason I added a new condition. If a Spell, Trap or Monster card return from Graveyard or Banish this card, you must pay 1000 life points if you want this effect gets sucessfully. Thanks for your suggest, there a great helping for me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDDRodrigo Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 Still so broken that Chaos Emperor Dragon, Fiber Jar and Delinquent Duo are jelly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 [quote name='Luis Edmundo' timestamp='1308453542' post='5294249'] Well, all are right; it's a overpowered card. It's reason I added a new condition. If a Spell, Trap or Monster card return from Graveyard or Banish this card, you must pay 1000 life points if you want this effect gets sucessfully. Thanks for your suggest, there a great helping for me! [/quote] You only need the effect to go off once and you've pretty much won unless your deck runs 200 ATK monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Maniac Posted June 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 [quote name='Miror B.' timestamp='1308456372' post='5294338'] You only need the effect to go off once and you've pretty much won unless your deck runs 200 ATK monsters. [/quote] Why do you have said? I don't understand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 [quote name='Luis Edmundo' timestamp='1308456915' post='5294353'] Why do you have said? I don't understand. [/quote] Skipping 1 or your opponent's turns can guarantee you the win. Skipping 2 more makes it pretty damn obvious you've won. Not only is the 1000 lp loss a bad downside, but the downside only activating when you want to use the effect again does not effect its brokeness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bebe3434 Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 Card is broken even with the drawback. =/ A LOT can happen in two turns. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Maniac Posted June 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 Now is corrected! The effect prevails with the essence. The 2nd effect was removed from description and the effect of turns negation can only be used one time at duel. Comment about this conditions. NOTE: There is a cost you must pay to return this card (it's useless after the activation of the effect of EP Dragon) to the bottom of your deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmperorNiro Posted June 22, 2011 Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 TOO STRONG! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted June 22, 2011 Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 This card is overpowered by a ton. If you skip your opponent's turn, as explained above, this card can become an instant Duel-finisher. The things that happen in two turns are hard to comprehend, but skipping your opponent's turn when it starts is basically what your doing. It might not be as bad if it was just skipping the Battle Phase, but there are a lot of cards that bring Dragon-Type monsters to your hand, and that can cause you to consistently skip your opponent's Battle Phase. I recommend making it a Battle Phase only card, that instantly ends the turn when you remove it from play from the field.... If you do that, maybe the card could manage a Ban to a limited 1 per Deck. Also, the picture is definitely blurry, but not to bad. I love the design, and the thought that you put into it, but I think you should clean it up a little. Looking forward to more cards, MyStiK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 22, 2011 Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 So your opp skip their Main phase too? i SAY No to this. paying to make it back to deck is unnecessary Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklord Draxon Posted June 22, 2011 Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 I want to say it is OP'ed in a way that it is worded to say this: Ok, your opponent draws 1 card during their draw phase and when it gets to their Main Phase, Bam! Their turn is skipped just by discarding that card and no matter the draw backs for it, it is a pretty broken card. If the effect were to say happen during the battle phase, then discarding it then would be ok also with a little drawback because then it will at least give your opponent a chance to summon a monster or use an effect. Here is a situation: Say I summoned 3 "[b]Ancient Gear Gadjiltron Dragon[/b]"s cuz I activated 3 "[b]Geartown[/b]"s with a "[b]Mausoleum of the Emperor[/b]" then I drop 2K to summon "[b]Anciennt Gear Golem[/b]" I end my turn. My opponent draws then starts their turn, then Bam! I pay the cost for that card you made which could be paying half my life to discard from my hand and look at that, its my turn again because it skips the rest of my opponents turn. Attack for game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Maniac Posted June 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 [quote name='~iMyStiK FAiLz~' timestamp='1308731029' post='5302345'] This card is overpowered by a ton. If you skip your opponent's turn, as explained above, this card can become an instant Duel-finisher. The things that happen in two turns are hard to comprehend, but skipping your opponent's turn when it starts is basically what your doing. It might not be as bad if it was just skipping the Battle Phase, but there are a lot of cards that bring Dragon-Type monsters to your hand, and that can cause you to consistently skip your opponent's Battle Phase. I recommend making it a Battle Phase only card, that instantly ends the turn when you remove it from play from the field.... If you do that, maybe the card could manage a Ban to a limited 1 per Deck. Also, the picture is definitely blurry, but not to bad. I love the design, and the thought that you put into it, but I think you should clean it up a little. Looking forward to more cards, MyStiK. [/quote] I'm totally agree about your suggestions. I will edit my EP to make lesser OP. Thank you and one answer: The effect of EP can only be activated one time in the duel. If you return him from Graveyard, the effect cannot be activated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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