BFG Studios Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 NOTE: I do NOT have the Xyz template for photo editors... just rate the picture, effect, and possible ocg errors [IMG]http://i1206.photobucket.com/albums/bb455/BFGstudios/TEMP_Test-1-1.jpg[/IMG] Lore: [b][size="4"]3 Level 4 monsters Monsters your opponent controls can only select this card as an attack target. When this card is selected as an attack target, select the attacking monster, remove 1 Exceed Material Monster from this card and discard 1 card. This card cannot be destroyed by battle until the End Phase. During your next Standby Phase, take control of the selected monster. Destroy it during the End Phase.[/size][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bebe3434 Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 I like the picture , but the name seems a little weird to me. The only comment i have is to put some restrictions on the card you take from your opponent(cannot attack, effect is negated, cannot be used as a tribute, stuff like that). Other than that it seems like a pretty nice card to me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted June 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 thanks for the feedback... yeah, the name was something just off the top of my head, just something really dumb i'll see what i can do for the effect and reduce OP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 'Sawright. Scrap Dragon can blow it up, Brionac can bounce it, etc. The opponent would never, ever attack this, so the effect is pure deterrence unless your opponent picked RDA over Scrappy in the Extra Deck. That would be silly. Maybe tone it down a bit. Name's weird. How about [quote]Gravidark Dragon[/quote]? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bebe3434 Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 [quote name='newhat' timestamp='1308462393' post='5294523'] 'Sawright. Scrap Dragon can blow it up, Brionac can bounce it, etc. The opponent would never, ever attack this, so the effect is pure deterrence unless your opponent picked RDA over Scrappy in the Extra Deck. That would be silly. Maybe tone it down a bit. Name's weird. How about ? [/quote] It can be comboed with cards like final attack orders, or savage colosseum, but those cards dont see much use anyhow. You should change it so that the effect also activates when it declares an attack, to give it more use cuz wat Newhat says is true. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 Hey, HEY, there is one and only one Bahamut ZERO bi***! Well I'm here now, so I'll review it. It had better be good (mumble, grumble) Takes a lot to summon, stats are good for it. All your other monsters are protected, and it protects itself for three attacks, but effect is compulsory, so you could end up chucking away cards and negating weak attacks you could do a lot of rebound damage to as your opponent takes advantage. So then you don't have any xyz materials left when they use Urgent Tuning or whatever to summon something that does actually go over it. Control ability is unfair to control and then destroy. All control effects I can think of return the monster at the end of the turn, not destroy it after you've beaten them round the head with it. If you allow it go back to your opponents field anyway you're playing it badly. So yeah, not fond of that as it is. Overall more trouble than its worth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 That 3 times negating an attack and get controlling the attacking monster are OPed, LIke bahamut said, that monster controlled should back to opp side of the field. Then it rather fair, 2700 rather hard to defeated. The only thing that this card must be destroyed by non-Battle, it make fair OCG : Exceed= Xyz, remove Xyz Material Monster= detach Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 [quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1308465613' post='5294622'] That 3 times negating an attack and get controlling the attacking monster are OPed, [/quote] Think about it, Maha. It's not OP'ed because it will never be used. It's effect is useless if your opponent doesn't attack it, and nobody's going to be stupid enough to attack knowing what will happen if they do; Plus, there are many ways to defeat it without battling, so it's perfectly fine as it is, though I wouldn't know anyone who would use it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EndlessOcean Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 3 Level 4 monsters Monsters your opponent controls can only select this card as an attack target. When this card is selected as an attack target, select the attacking monster; detach 1 Exceed Material Monster from this card and discard 1 card; this card cannot be destroyed by battle until the End Phase. During your next Standby Phase; take control of the selected monster; destroy it during the End Phase. Fix'd OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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