King Barron Posted June 21, 2011 Report Share Posted June 21, 2011 [attachment=32823:metroid card.jpg] When this card is summoned you can attach this card to an enemy monster and continuously decrease its atk/def by 200 each turn until either atk or def becomes 0 and is destroyed and this card will gain 500 atk and 200 def or you can attach this card to a magic or trap card and negate its ability until it is used or destroyed, you can remove this card before the opponents card is destroyed resulting in a 100 atk and 50 def bonus per turn up to 400 atk and 150 def [attachment=32824:samus v card.jpg] This card can not be destroyed in 1 battle, instead the def is decreased by half until it is 0, then this card is destroyed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nu-Mou Knight Posted June 21, 2011 Report Share Posted June 21, 2011 1st: Don't use attachments. Click on your YCM card and copy the URL underneath it. OCG: Bad. Really bad. Look at any experienced card makers, and you will see the obvious problems. You also have a big problem with English apparently because your whole card effect is a big run-on sentence that should be divided up so it looks nicer instead of being one long droning sentence that stretches for the whole dang card that will tend to confuse people. And, please end your sentences with a period. U rnt txtn ur buhds, plz lurn 2 nd ur sntncs proprle. Images: Since you're new, I'll be nice about this. Do not use pics that have an only black or only white background. Look for something with more pizzazz. Other problems: Don't use Fake Types. Especially one as lame as "Human Hunter". That's basically what a Warrior is. >_> Metroid is just a bit overpowered for Level 4. 2000 ATK is just over the usual limit, and considering it's effect, it should be lower. Something around 1800 would be better. I'll give you a 2/10 for these. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Barron Posted June 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2011 my cards are not supposed to be good, nor realistic, i make them for fun, not how realistic they are. I did not put them in the realistic section and besides I suck at art and english anyway. I really don't care about fake types, nor do I care if the name is "lame". Just because I have an english problem does not give you an open invitation to insult me, I don't even text on my phone.[img]http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/9499/191596.jpg[/img] [img]http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/9499/191596.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Barron Posted June 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 [img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/9499/191596.jpg[/img] Galactic federation trooper Reason I named it Cannon Fodder: Despite what the description in Metroid Prime 3 says "They have no equal in combat" (which is somewhat true, nothing really sucks in combat as much as them) yet everything kills them in a 1 on 1 fight. Throughout the game when ever they fight pirate troopers or militia they get killed with pretty much no effort. [b]JUST SO YOU KNOW[/b] The quote can't be found in any metroid games or anywhere else in existance except for on this card. Also if you either: Have seen a GF trooper win in a 1 on 1 fight or think Im a complete retard (which I am but who cares?) if you have to post about either of these or about how much my cards suck please don't be mean about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Strawberry Posted June 28, 2011 Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 Pics are a little pixelated. Take the cards and edit your original post, removing the attachments and replacing them with the Image Shack pictures. Also, add lore(the description) underneath every card, the Metroid's print is so small I didn't even try to read it. And "Somehow a Warror" isn't an official subtype. Replace it with Warrior. As Nu-Mou said your OCG is bad, and the spelling errors make Samus' effect unnecessarily difficult to read. 3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Barron Posted June 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 [quote name='SmileyOfChaos' timestamp='1309303878' post='5318136'] Pics are a little pixelated. Take the cards and edit your original post, removing the attachments and replacing them with the Image Shack pictures. Also, add lore(the description) underneath every card, the Metroid's print is so small I didn't even try to read it. And "Somehow a Warror" isn't an official subtype. Replace it with Warrior. As Nu-Mou said your OCG is bad, and the spelling errors make Samus' effect unnecessarily difficult to read. 3/10. [/quote] Please read my previous posts it will save me a lot of time trying to explain that [b]my cards suck and I don't care[/b] thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigCheese Posted June 28, 2011 Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 Im not going to comment you your first card because I can't see the Lore but I do however want to point something out about your Samus Aran (Vaira) that made me laugh so hard. The idea is that when it is attacked its DEF is halved and the process is repeated again the next time it is attacked and you say that it is sent to the Graveyard when its DEF reaches 0. [b]This is the part when I lol'd[/b]: If you decrease 3000 by half you get 1500 and if you decrease 1500 by half you get 750 and if you decrease 750 by half you get 375 and if you decrease 375 by half If you get 187.5 and if you decrease 187.5 by half you get 93.75 and if you decrease 93.75 by half you get 46.875 and if you decrease 46.875 by half you get 23.4375 and if you decrease 23.4375 by half you get 11.71875 and if you decrease 11.71875 by half you get 5.859375..........are you beginning to see a patern forming here. If you always have a tangible number to decrease by half you will never reach 0 making your card INDESTRUCTABLE!!!! I would do something about that Regards....... TheBigCheese Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Barron Posted June 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 Oh god that was poorly worded, the decrease was based on the original amount so it would take 2 turns to kill samus (varia) as for the metroid the description is in the first post but for people who did not read it When this card is summoned you can attach this card to an enemy monster and continuously decrease its atk/def by 200 each turn until either atk or def becomes 0 and is destroyed and this card will gain 500 atk and 200 def or you can attach this card to a magic or trap card and negate its ability until it is used or destroyed. You can remove this card before the opponents card is destroyed resulting in a 100 atk and 50 def bonus per turn up to 400 atk and 150 def. yes the description (and the cards) suck but [b]I don't care and don't post about how they suck [/b] Also [b]I don't care that the types are not real[/b] thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight of Emotion Posted June 28, 2011 Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 If you cards suck then Why bother posting them in the first place? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Strawberry Posted June 28, 2011 Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 Our job as fellow Card Makers is to critique others' cards. If they suck, we will say so. That way the card's maker can go back and remake the card(s) until they get it right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight of Emotion Posted June 28, 2011 Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 Exactly...I'm not afraid to tell people if their cards suck or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Barron Posted June 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 [quote name='Hybrid-X89-0rb' timestamp='1309305361' post='5318246'] If you cards suck then Why bother posting them in the first place? [/quote] Because I post them for fun not for quality thank you for reading the posts so I did not have to waste time on repeatedly saying I know they suck and I don't care. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight of Emotion Posted June 29, 2011 Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 If you like to post joke cards then go to Any Other Cards category...not Pop Arts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Barron Posted June 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 [quote name='SmileyOfChaos' timestamp='1309305455' post='5318253'] Our job as fellow Card Makers is to critique others' cards. If they suck, we will say so. That way the card's maker can go back and remake the card(s) until they get it right. [/quote] yeah well I suck at life so bad it is impossible for a poor lazy mentally handicapped sack of crap like me could make a card that would even qualify for a 5/10 on your ratings scale (just look at my other cards) And hybrid these are based off of video game stuff so it kinda belongs in the pop culture section Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigCheese Posted June 29, 2011 Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 [quote name='King Barron' timestamp='1309306093' post='5318296'] yeah well I suck at life so bad it is impossible for a poor lazy mentally handicapped sack of crap like me could make a card that would even qualify for a 5/10 on your ratings scale (just look at my other cards) And hybrid these are based off of video game stuff so it kinda belongs in the pop culture section [/quote] Why do you keep putting yourself down? I actually find it slightly offensive that you call yourself - "[b]a poor lazy mentally handicapped sack of crap[/b]" as there are in fact people out there with severe disabilities and real problems that hinder their everyday lives. You on the other hand struggle to make great Yu-Gi-Oh cards......I hope you can see the veritable contrast between someone with a real disability and someone who sucks at making Yu-Gi-Oh cards. Please stop coming to the YGCM forum and looking for atention, thanks. Regards........ TheBigCheese Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Barron Posted June 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 I actually do have those problemsis it possible to delete this topic so I don't have to worry about this stupid thing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigCheese Posted June 29, 2011 Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 [quote name='King Barron' timestamp='1309307658' post='5318355'] I actually do have those problems [/quote] I'm sorry if you do but specifically what problems do you suffer? Are they problems that hinder you from reading, writing or understanding? Because you seem to be reading writing and understanding everything that is going on it this thread perfectly fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight of Emotion Posted June 29, 2011 Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 If you do have them..then don't compare your disability with your card making skills. My friend who can't talk and is very sensitive actually created one of my cards on my Mystical Guardian of Earth Archtype. And I'm not bragging. I'm just pointing out that even if you have a disability (or Autism) doesn't mean he can't create cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigCheese Posted June 29, 2011 Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 [quote name='Hybrid-X89-0rb' timestamp='1309308013' post='5318374'] If you do have them..then don't compare your disability with your card making skills. My friend who can't talk and is very sensitive actually created one of my cards on my Mystical Guardian of Earth Archtype. And I'm not bragging. I'm just pointing out that even if you have a disability (or Autism) doesn't mean he can't create cards. [/quote] I agree with what you just said completely. That is why I was so offended when he made the excuse that he was disabled especially if you look at both sides of the coin: 1. If he does have an issue, as you so rightely stated, it should not hinder him from creating a set of cards and he especially shouldn't bemoan his fate on YCM 2. If he doesn't have an issue and he is simply looking for attention then that is morally wrong and as I said before offensive What you said was true. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight of Emotion Posted June 29, 2011 Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 [quote name='TheBigCheese' timestamp='1309308271' post='5318388'] I agree with what you just said completely. That is why I was so offended when he made the excuse that he was disabled especially if you look at both sides of the coin: 1. If he does have an issue, as you so rightely stated, it should not hinder him from creating a set of cards and he especially shouldn't bemoan his fate on YCM 2. If he doesn't have an issue and he is simply looking for attention then that is morally wrong and as I said before offensive What you said was true. [/quote] Thank you for agreeing with me. I'm only 14 years old...but I have common sense.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Barron Posted June 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 [quote name='TheBigCheese' timestamp='1309307853' post='5318362'] I'm sorry if you do but specifically what problems do you suffer? Are they problems that hinder you from reading, writing or understanding? Because you seem to be reading writing and understanding everything that is going on it this thread perfectly fine. [/quote] Autism, depresion, a type of insanity that i dont know the name of and im slightly retarded the only reason my reading and writing is good is because my mom helps me (i live with my parents because i cant support myself)is there someone who can delete this topic it is upsetting me greatly? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigCheese Posted June 29, 2011 Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 [quote name='King Barron' timestamp='1309309537' post='5318426'] Autism, depresion, a type of insanity that i dont know the name of and im slightly retarded the only reason my reading and writing is good is because my mom helps me (i live with my parents because i cant support myself) is there someone who can delete this topic it is upsetting me greatly? [/quote] I am sorry if I caused any offence. This is a very controversial and delicate topic that requires a level of maturity to engage with. Try not to put yourself down, don't worry what the YCM community has to say about your cards, it's not what they say that is important, it's how you interpret what is said that is important. You will get the occasional member come in and try to torch your work so all you can do is try to take some positives from what they say and try and improve your skills as a cardmaker. Once again I can understand that this is a sensitive issue that you want wrapped up. If you need any help with anything then please PM me Regards............. TheBigCheese Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight of Emotion Posted June 29, 2011 Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 ...man that touched me. And I agree somebody should just CLOSE this topic. If I hurt your feelings I apologize for being a complete a******... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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