Alice Moonflowyr Posted June 21, 2011 Report Share Posted June 21, 2011 kay, here it is. [spoiler=teh card][img]http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/4110/203822.jpg[/img][/spoiler] If you like it, I will make a set out of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigCheese Posted June 21, 2011 Report Share Posted June 21, 2011 Speculative? If I have understood the card correctly, am I right in thinking that while you control it, you can win by getting your Life Points to 15000? Is that not a tad speculative? Having said that, used in the right deck this could be a formidable weapon and the focal point of a Life Point deck. I have not been on here long but I don't think that there has been a card like this before so well done for your level or originality. The OCG in my opinion is slightly off but I am not adept enough to attempt to change it as I fear my attempt will only be different and not in fact the correct version. All I can say is that the second part of your effect - "While this card is on the field, if you ever have 15000 Life Points, you win the game." - doesn't sound completely correct, perhaps someone else will weigh in and correct it for you. Another slight flaw is its ATK and DEF coupled with its effect. Realistically over the course of a duel with 0 ATK and DEF and with no effect to keep it on the field, it will get wiped out unless you combine it with a set of other cards, however they do exist and it is possible to keep this card protected over the course of a duel although it may be a struggle. I was pleased with this card as it is creative and balanced (if anything it may be slightly UP'd) I do believe however if you added a second effect to keep it on the field, it would balance it, giving you a fantastic card indeed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted June 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2011 [quote name='TheBigCheese' timestamp='1308662448' post='5300133'] If I have understood the card correctly, am I right in thinking that while you control it, you can win by getting your Life Points to 15000? Is that not a tad speculative? Having said that, used in the right deck this could be a formidable weapon and the focal point of a Life Point deck. I have not been on here long but I don't think that there has been a card like this before so well done for your level or originality. Another slight flaw is its ATK and DEF coupled with its effect. Realistically over the course of a duel with 0 ATK and DEF and with no effect to keep it on the field, it will get wiped out unless you combine it with a set of other cards, however they do exist and it is possible to keep this card protected over the course of a duel although it may be a struggle. [/quote] <BR>Thanks! And, I have an idea for a card set for this, and that will give the monsters a way to live. <BR>EDIT: Yes, you are right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted June 21, 2011 Report Share Posted June 21, 2011 Its broken because since its worded as a continuous effect it can't really be negated and you give this one card heart of clear water and you pretty much are immortal. Next though I love giving life gain decks something to actually work for is great but I have gone against to many where they end up with 50,000 lifepoints so its not that hard. I do like the card and deem it a success if it ever existed it would have to be at one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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