Veniet Posted June 21, 2011 Report Share Posted June 21, 2011 [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/3091/432697.jpg[/img] [b]Effect-[/b] When "Maizumi Sanada" is face-up on your side of the field, decrease the ATK of all of your opponent's face-up monsters by 200 points until the End Phase of this turn. This card deals piercing damage so long as "Maizumi Sanada" is under your control. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Strawberry Posted June 21, 2011 Report Share Posted June 21, 2011 What exactly do you mean "until the End Phase of this turn?" Unless you mean only during your turn, you should take that part out, otherwise make it "by 200 points [b]during your turn only[/b]". Also, "when Maizumi Sanada" should be changed to "[b]while[/b] Maizumi Sanada". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veniet Posted June 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 err, thanks very much for clearing that up for me. I just finished my 41st card recently, and I'll take a little break for now. I have a whole list to review, but I won't use up an entire topic for them all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Strawberry Posted June 22, 2011 Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 After looking over what I said, I realize that I could've worded that a little bit better. Confused myself until I looked at it for a few seconds. But that's what happens when you try to think right as you're waking up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veniet Posted June 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 Ha. well morning. Or evening, whatever. I am updating existing cards. Almost a pain, but hey. I love them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 22, 2011 Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 When "Maizumi Sanada" is face-up on your side of the field, decrease the ATK of all of your opponent's face-up monsters by 200 points [s]until the End Phase of this turn[/s] during your turn only. This card inflicts Piercing Battle Damage as long as "Maizumi Sanada" is under your control. Where's that Mazumi thing ? It is your card right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veniet Posted June 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 Yes. I can post her if you want. SHe's in earlier posts though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 22, 2011 Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 Sorry i dont follow all of your cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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