Dragonruler321 Posted June 29, 2011 Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 Im relatively new to ycm but even I can see at least 15 ocg errors in the set.also on the cadet guy (is it cardio?) you started its effect with "well", not "while" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ЯчυКδ ңґεηđдϊ Posted June 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 [quote name='Dragonruler321' timestamp='1309335902' post='5319110'] Im relatively new to ycm but even I can see at least 15 ocg errors in the set. also on the cadet guy (is it cardio?) you started its effect with "well", not "while" [/quote] I knew I had OCG errors and woops i'll have to fix that. I'm good at picking out others errors but not my own. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted June 29, 2011 Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 weird. Some pics are nice..some pics are..uwaaah! ugly.. But most important are the effects..am i right...guessing this whole DOOM Archetype is about banishing and Doom Counters? thats nothing new...no need for an Archetype in my opinion.. Effects are ok - Balance is allright Originality? none OCG - you already know it ^^ hmm But the concept isnt too bad 6.5/10 PS: Do more than just "Counter = gains ATK or destroys monster" and "Banish monster...since this is a DOOM Archetype..Muahaa" . How about a whole new kind of effect? It doesnt have to be 100% Unique..but a little more originality wont hurt.. Im lookin forward to future cards...since you got that great advice from me You might get a much better rating then..as your style is nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ЯчυКδ ңґεηđдϊ Posted June 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 [quote name='Dr.Gentle' timestamp='1309341250' post='5319179'] weird. Some pics are nice..some pics are..uwaaah! ugly.. But most important are the effects..am i right...guessing this whole DOOM Archetype is about banishing and Doom Counters? thats nothing new...no need for an Archetype in my opinion.. Effects are ok - Balance is allright Originality? none OCG - you already know it ^^ hmm But the concept isnt too bad 6.5/10 PS: Do more than just "Counter = gains ATK or destroys monster" and "Banish monster...since this is a DOOM Archetype..Muahaa" . How about a whole new kind of effect? It doesnt have to be 100% Unique..but a little more originality wont hurt.. Im lookin forward to future cards...since you got that great advice from me You might get a much better rating then..as your style is nice [/quote] Thanks, i'll do alittle bit of tweakin and add some new things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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