david ice Posted June 21, 2011 Report Share Posted June 21, 2011 feel free to comment [img]http://img571.imageshack.us/img571/2428/431909.jpg[/img] [size=2][img]http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/1072/431909p.jpg[/img] [/size] [img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/8261/431909l.jpg[/img] [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/2428/431909.jpg[/img] [img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/2428/431909.jpg[/img] [img]http://img542.imageshack.us/img542/2428/431909.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Strawberry Posted June 21, 2011 Report Share Posted June 21, 2011 Sorry to be blunt, but there are tons of errors in these cards. Besides the fact that most of them should be in Pop Culture (yup can't ignore it, it's the rules), several of the pics weren't sized right for the card, there's unnecessary text in the pictures, you can't make your own types (try turning Saiyan into Warrior), and the descriptions are riddled with too many OCG mistakes to list. Also, all the DBZ cards are horribly overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
david ice Posted July 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 BUMP! [Card text changed] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
david ice Posted July 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 BUMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nu-Mou Knight Posted July 28, 2011 Report Share Posted July 28, 2011 Okay, let's see here...pics are the biggest complaint I'll have. Have you even tried using Paint? It's not that hard to get used to. Second, grammar, OCG, and sense: Tony Stark is kinda wordy. Try this: When this card is targeted for an attack, you can add 1 "Briefcase" to your hand from your Deck and send this card to the Graveyard. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by this effect, Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase. You have a big problem with the Briefcase and Mark 5. Briefcase wants to summon Mark 6, and Tony Stark is too low leveled to make it an actual Ritual Summon. You might want to add that you have to Tribute other monsters, and change the numerals accordingly. I'm seeing that all of the armors have the Unibeam (you don't have to quote counter names) counter effect, but don't see any real use for it. (hint: Spell Counters and other counters are not considered the same.) That's all I have for now. I'm giving you a 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
catlover2011 Posted July 29, 2011 Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 [quote name='SmileyOfChaos' timestamp='1308699559' post='5301328'] Sorry to be blunt, but there are tons of errors in these cards. Besides the fact that most of them should be in Pop Culture (yup can't ignore it, it's the rules), several of the pics weren't sized right for the card, there's unnecessary text in the pictures, you can't make your own types (try turning Saiyan into Warrior), and the descriptions are riddled with too many OCG mistakes to list. Also, all the DBZ cards are horribly overpowered. [/quote] what are you talking about these are iron man cards not DBZ cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pppaulius Posted July 29, 2011 Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 Yeah pics are bad...OCG errors, overall in noobie league, not bad 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
david ice Posted July 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 [quote name='Nu-Mou Knight' timestamp='1311864328' post='5395128'] Okay, let's see here...pics are the biggest complaint I'll have. Have you even tried using Paint? It's not that hard to get used to. Second, grammar, OCG, and sense: Tony Stark is kinda wordy. Try this: When this card is targeted for an attack, you can add 1 "Briefcase" to your hand from your Deck and send this card to the Graveyard. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by this effect, Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase. You have a big problem with the Briefcase and Mark 5. Briefcase wants to summon Mark 6, and Tony Stark is too low leveled to make it an actual Ritual Summon. You might want to add that you have to Tribute other monsters, and change the numerals accordingly. I'm seeing that all of the armors have the Unibeam (you don't have to quote counter names) counter effect, but don't see any real use for it. (hint: Spell Counters and other counters are not considered the same.) That's all I have for now. I'm giving you a 5/10 [/quote] what do you mean by using paint,are you saying i must draw the pics myself and do you rather perfer drawn pics than the realistic ones? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nu-Mou Knight Posted July 30, 2011 Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 No, a built-in program on most modern Windows systems. Sometimes called MSPaint, you can manipulate the image to an extent. That would include moving it around, and shrinking the borders, effectively cropping the picture. I'm not asking you to draw the card images. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
david ice Posted August 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 Fixed briefcase and the croping issue,and i did not want to crop the pics cause first i wanted a full body pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hɑrdy Posted August 1, 2011 Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 The OCG is atrocious and there is 0 creativeness. Basically; [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/258178-pop-culture-section-for-dummies/#entry5402615"]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/258178-pop-culture-section-for-dummies/#entry5402615[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
david ice Posted August 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 [quote name='Number 85' timestamp='1312218250' post='5404648'] The OCG is atrocious and there is 0 creativeness. Basically; [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/258178-pop-culture-section-for-dummies/#entry5402615"]http://forum.yugiohc...s/#entry5402615[/url] [/quote] o this is what you are talking about on sonic.And about creativity,if you have any knowledge of iron man is that all his suite basically do the same thing example their all an exoskeleton,all have repulosors etc.get your facts straight. And feel free to comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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