Classic Posted June 22, 2011 Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 [b][center][font="Century Gothic"][size="1.5"][color="#8B0000"]Wanted to make a sort of Personification of you & your life pointe in the game... Did that make sense or am I just reinforcing the possibllity I'm insane... Err well here is zeh card. [img]http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/2705/131224.jpg[/img] [u]Effect[/u] This card can only be activated by banishing monsters you control or in your hand whose ATK add up to you current Life Points or higher. The activation of this card cannot be negated. This card is unaffected by card effects. As long as this card remains face-up on the field you cannot lose the Duel by having 0 Life Points. When this card is successfully activated decrease your Life Points to 0 and Special Summon this card as an Effect Monster (Rock-Type/DARK/Level 12/ATK: ?/DEF: ?) (This card is still treated as a Spell card) While this card is treated as an Effect Monster it gains this effect: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to your Life Points at the Draw Phase of the turn you activated this card. If your opponent activates a card that would inflict damage to your Life Points, you can discard 1 card to negate the effect and destroy that card, if you do not remove the amount of damage that would have been inflicted from this card's ATK and DEF instead. While this card is in Attack Position and is targeted for an attack by a monster with less ATK than this card subtract 1/4 of the attacking monster's ATK from this card's ATK and DEF and destroy that card. (Damage Calculation is applied normally) Once per Duel, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to have this card gain ATK and DEf equal to the Tributed monster's ATK or DEF. If this card is destroyed, or its ATK and DEF reach 0, you lose the Duel. Overdid~~~ the effect xD [color="#0000FF"]Rate[/color], [color=red]Hate[/color], [color="#FFFF00"]Appreciate[/color][/color][/size][/font][/center][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 [color="#FF0000"][center][size="1.5"][font="Century Gothic"]Bump, come on i need help with this card >.< (xD)[/font][/size][/center][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 22, 2011 Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 This card can only be activated by banishing monsters you control whose ATK add up to you current Life Points or higher. The activation of this card cannot be negated. This card is unaffected by card effects. As long as this card remains face-up on the field you cannot lose the Duel by having 0 Life Points. When this card is successfully activated decrease your Life Points to 0 and Special Summon this card as an Effect Monster (Rock-Type/DARK/Level 12/ATK: ?/DEF: ?) (This card is still treated as a Spell card) While this card is treated as an Effect Monster it gains this effect: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to your Life Points at the Draw Phase of the turn you activated this card. [s]This card cannot be targeted for an attack if you control another face-up monster[/s]. If your opponent activates a card that would inflict damage to your Life Points, you can discard 1 card to negate the effect and destroy that card, if you do not remove the amount of damage that would have been inflicted from this card's ATK and DEF instead. While this card is in Attack Position and is targeted for an attack by a monster with less ATK than this card subtract 1/4 of the attacking monster's ATK from this card's ATK and DEF and destroy the that card. (Damage Calculation is applied normally) Once per Duel, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to have this card gain ATK and DEf equal to the Tributed monster's ATK or DEF. If this card is destroyed, or its ATK and DEF reach 0, destroy this card. Wow, my eyes heated when i so em in red font. so i CoPas em. Very very odd effects but it is good. IMO just half of tributed monster ATK and DEF, to make this balance. Other that , i found that this card really really original. edit : knowing it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted June 22, 2011 Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 [quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1308765253' post='5303099'] Wow, my eyes heated. MST and you dead? [/quote] That's exactly what I was thinking the first time I saw this card. This card should only be used in a last resort scenario. It would be silly to use it at any other time. It definitely stalls very well, so that you can regain momentum. I like it a lot. But, considering you need monsters on your field to activate this card... it is a tad bit under powered. Maybe change the cost requirements? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 [font="Century Gothic"][color="#0000FF"][center]@ Maha xD, should i make the text (atleast for the effect) not red?... And maybe ill make it Half, but its only once per duel so... :L And how could MST destroy it, its unaffected by card effects :L Also Thanks for OCG Fix but why did you cross out the Cannot be attacked part? o.o @ Altair It was meant for last resort yes.. i actually almost named it something like that xD. Ya for the summoning conditions i realized that could be a problem.. maybe i could make it banish cards in your hand, and on your Field?... Anyways; Thanks for feedback. And glad you both like it ^^.[/center][/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted June 22, 2011 Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 That sounds a lot more useful, yeah. I think this card adds a nice twist to the game, which is why I really like it. Oh, for the rating, I think this gets a 10/10, especially for the creativity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 22, 2011 Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 Thats why i edit it. I just noticed that this card cannot be destroyed by cards effects. I crossed because this is too powerful if it cant be suggested. I mean it to be a suggestion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 [color="#808000"][font="Century Gothic"][size="1.5"][center]@ Altair Thanks for Rate. And i will probably edit the effect in a few minutes. (Go laziness!~~~) @ Maha Oh i see xD. And i will think about it, the reason i made that effect was to make it Life Point-like. (xD).[/center][/size][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 22, 2011 Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 Then it only have 1 weakness (not control other monster, and it is rare these days). and lot of abilities which make this card imbalanced, and considered OPed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 [color="#4B0082"][font="Century Gothic"][size="1.5"][center]GAH, at the end of the Effect i meant to mention you lose the duel if it was destroyed >.<. Anyways i edited the effect.[/center][/size][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ЯчυКδ ңґεηđдϊ Posted June 22, 2011 Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 Nice card. Reminds me of Divine Serpent... God I love that card wish they made it real... But yea OCG looks good. 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 [color="#006400"][size="1.5"][font="Century Gothic"][center]Thanks for rate ^^.[/center][/font][/size][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 [center][color="#483D8B"][size="1.5"][font="Century Gothic"]BuMp[/font][/size][/color][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xzMasteRzx Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 Wow, that's pretty smart stuff. I like the invincibility thing, and the risks. I also like how it's an army of one card that allows you to beat down the opponent too. If you had cards that could support this, it would make a great set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 [color="#556B2F"][font="Century Gothic"][size="1.5"][center]Thanks for feedback ^^, Glad you like it[/center][/size][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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