Master White Posted June 22, 2011 Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 [center] Corrected Effect Fix by MyStik. Thank you. I realized I only need 7 zones for crystal beasts, so I made it an continuous... [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/3025/121293y.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b] [i] During each of your 3rd Standby Phases after this card's activation, you can Normal Summon or Set 1 additional monster during your Main Phase. During your 12th Standby Phase after this card's activation, you can send this face-up card to the Graveyard to Normal Summon or Set 2 additional monsters during your Main Phase. [/i] Rate/Hate/Like/Love/Whatever.... Please use constructive criticism, thank you.... [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 22, 2011 Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 standby phase. It is Standby Phase. Did we can Normal Summon or Set a monster during a Standby Phase? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted June 22, 2011 Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 Plus: This card has a decent effect. I understood what you were going for. Minus: The OCG could be fixed up a bit. [spoiler= Corrected Lore] During each of your 3rd Standby Phases after this card's activation, you can Normal Summon or Set 1 additional monster during your Main Phase. During your 12th Standby Phase after this card's activation, you can send this face-up card to the Graveyard to Normal Summon or Set 2 additional monsters during your Main Phase. [/spoiler] I think that's more of the effect you were going for. Plus: This card can be good for swarm Decks. Minus: The card should be a Continuous Spell Card. Hope I helped you out, MyStiK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted June 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 [quote name='~iMyStiK FAiLz~' timestamp='1308734373' post='5302412'] Plus: This card has a decent effect. I understood what you were going for. Minus: The OCG could be fixed up a bit. [spoiler= Corrected Lore] During each of your 3rd Standby Phases after this card's activation, you can Normal Summon or Set 1 additional monster during your Main Phase. During your 12th Standby Phase after this card's activation, you can send this face-up card to the Graveyard to Normal Summon or Set 2 additional monsters during your Main Phase. [/spoiler] I think that's more of the effect you were going for. Plus: This card can be good for swarm Decks. Minus: The card should be a Continuous Spell Card. Hope I helped you out, MyStiK. [/quote] Thank you, that is the effect I was going for... Reason I didn't make it continous is b/c I wanted to use it for crystal beast monsters, and if you use a Spell/Trap Zone, then it is harder to bring out the Crystal Beast. But thank you MyStik for the effect fix and I still might change it to continuous, not positive yet. @Maha: Sorry, didn't word it right, MyStik understood what I was going for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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