Rehva Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 [center][size="1"][b]So basically, i made another Gandora. Name idea came from Gandora , Effect KIND OF came from Gandora , and Picture even looks like gandora.. Kinda. LOL ![/b][/size] [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/f1z09e.jpg[/IMG] [img]http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/9927/43481.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Effect] [size="1"][b]This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card cannot be destroyed by battle while in Attack Position. (Damage calculation is applied normally.) If this card is in Defense Position, destroy it. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to swap the ATK and DEF factors of this card until the end of the turn in which this card's Effect was Activated. When this card is destroyed or banished from the field (except by its own Efffect), destroy all face-up monsters on the Field. [/b][/size][/spoiler][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Strawberry Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Just make the ATK a single 0 and you'll be good. 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EndlessOcean Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 OCG fix:This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card cannot be destroyed by battle while in Attack Position. (Damage calculation is applied normally.) If this card is in Defense Position, destroy it. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to swap the ATK and DEF of this card until the End Phase of the turn in which this card's Effect was Activated. When this card is destroyed and banished from the field (except by its own Efffect), destroy all face-up monsters on the Field. BTW, you do know that banished is removed from play right? Just checking, because it seems an odd requirement to have. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted June 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 [quote]BTW, you do know that banished is removed from play right? Just checking, because it seems an odd requirement to have. [/quote] Facepalm.. it was suppose to say, Destroyed 'OR' Banished ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AkatsukiPride! Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Nice card dude. Its nice and balanced, but the real gandora would instantly destroy it...and itself, due to your guys last effect...I shouldn't over think this. Anyway, I love the idea, and the card is great. I love Gandora, and love this card too. 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted June 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Thanks (: Just for that, im going to give you a rep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Excellent card.... Let's go over the details: (ESPN Sports Network Music Plays) [u][b]Art[/b][/u]: I love the image. I do think that it could be well-derived from Gandora. Although, I'd prefer a different background for the picture, maybe similar to Gandora's. [u][b]OCG[/b][/u]: The OCG was flawless from most of what I saw. [u][b]Effect[/b][/u]: Considering it takes 2 Tributes, and its effect is similar to Gandora's, I would say it isn't overpowered. Although, I might lower the ATK a little bit, especially if you can switch the factors. Plus, anytime he's destroyed or banished? I don't know, I feel like he gets a few to many positives. I'd feel more comfortable with 3000 DEF, but that's just me. I figure if he gets to destroy everything when he is destroyed OR removed, he should have some type of backfire. :/ [u][b]Creativity[/b][/u]: I like the whole concept of a new Gandora. I find that very creative. Keep up the good work. Creativity is the key, MyStiK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted June 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 The downside is, he takes Damage while in attack position ): and he's INSTA destroyed if book of moon hits him or Attack Block targets him. ;\ Destroyed in Defense Position doesn't trigger his effect so yeah . YOU MY FRIEND DESERVE A REP. Thanks for taking your time to review my card (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 I believe that Book of Moon would only affect him if your opponent willingly attacked him while he was face-down, because then he'd be flipped to face-up Defense Position. Btw, I just noticed that (By his own effect), the effect has 3 fs. And although he takes damage in Attack Position, people would be unlikely to attack due to his effect. Therefore, you have yourself a wall unless they play something that can change his Battle Position. And thank you kind sir, but I'm just reviewing your card like I would anyone else's. <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted June 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 lol, i see you changed your name (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loiden Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 pretty good card. but i think he is OP'd. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashedwin Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 i think it would be best if you changed it from revengeful to vengeful. i think it sounds better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 [quote name='Raze.' timestamp='1308947635' post='5307867'] lol, i see you changed your name (: [/quote] Lol, Indeed I did. x3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted June 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 [size="1"][b]Thanks chuuu.[/b][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted June 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2011 asdasd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted June 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2011 BUMP ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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