242 Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 this is the first card i made let me know what you thinkgrammar errors whatever's wrong let me know what you think (i try to keep it realistic)by the way whats an OCG error?:shock::neutral: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 Really bad OCG and Grammar; ouch! Picture aint at all bad nor the name though. I know this is your first card just put a 'lil bit more effort into it next time. 4/10 -_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 OCG = Official Card Grammar, the way in which your effect is worded. If your effect is not worded as it would be on a real card, then its classed as an OCG error. There are some errors but a beautiful picture Great effort ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maspe Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 no offense but grammar is just well............ how to put this nicly????? needs work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 C'mon guys, try and help.When this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 "Evasions Of Faith" from your hand or Deck.The next part of the effect would be written on Evasions Of Faith.2000 attack 4 star = overpowered.0002 defense?Nice try for a first 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
242 Posted February 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 not quite sure...how would the be worded on a real card? is there a tutorial for it(OCG)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
242 Posted February 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 thank : arpeejajo tht kinda clears things up..a little Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 not quite sure...how would the be worded on a real card? is there a tutorial for it(OCG)? Here, word it like this:When this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 "Evasions Of Faith" from your hand or Deck. The part about Evasions Of Faith would be written on that card not Evasions Of Light. Change the attack to like 1800 and 0002 defense is not a good number, try 200? or 500? or 1000? or a number that ends with 0? EDIT: No problem, but don't double post. Hit the edit button and edit your post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
242 Posted February 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 am still learning but i think this is a bit better, is it? Ill get better over time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElMikkino Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 Nice, but what do you mean by "effect fades"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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