mehdi99 Posted June 27, 2011 Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 Hello this is my first set of yugioh.Those cards are from my new booster pack(PDM).Sorry about my english,i am from Argentina. [img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/3636/magic1m.jpg[/img] Sea Serpent A large dragon brought from the ocean depths.Those who faced the might never live to tell it. ------------------------------ [img]http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/999/magic2kk.jpg[/img] When this card inflict battle damage to your oponnents life points.You can special summon 1 Sea Serpent monster from your graveyard with 1900 ATK or less.It cannot declare an attack this turn. ------------------------------ [img]http://img594.imageshack.us/img594/9523/magic4h.jpg[/img] If your oponent control 2 or more monsters,You can special summon this card from your hand.Once per turn you can tribute this card and 1 monster you control to special summon 1 "Dragon of Gold Flakes" from your hand or deck. ------------------------------ [img]http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/7789/magic3.jpg[/img] This card cannot be normal summoned or set.If this card is special summoned,draw 1 card. ------------------------------ [img]http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/8689/magic5l.jpg[/img] If you control no monsters,you can special summon this card from your hand ------------------------------ [img]http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/7184/magic6s.jpg[/img] When this card attack a monster in face-up attack position,you can change it to defense position.When you take battle damage from a battle of this card.You can special summon 1 Sea Serpent monster from your deck whose ATK is equal or lower to the Damage. ------------------------------ [img]http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/6982/magic7.jpg[/img] When this card is normal summonedyou can discard 2 cards from your hand to summon 1 lv 4 or lower Serpent Sea monster from your deck.That monster cannot declare an attack and it is destroyed during the end phase. ------------------------------ [img]http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/3971/magic8f.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner+1 or more non tuner monsters When this card is Synchro summoned.Select 1 Sea Serpent monster in your graveyard.Increase the level of this equal to the level of that monster(max 12) and special summon that monster in face-up attack position. ------------------------------ [img]http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/5731/magic9.jpg[/img] 1 Sea Serpent Dark Tuner+1 or more Sea Serpent non-tuner monsters.When this card is summoned succesfully.Discard 1 card to destroy all set cards your oponnent Control. ------------------------------ [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/7371/magic10.jpg[/img] Tribute 1 level 5 or higher Sea Serpent Monster.Special summon 1 Sea Serpent monster from your hand. ------------------------------ [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/3152/magic13.jpg[/img] Activate this card while you summon 2 monsters at the same time.Destroy 1 card on the field. ------------------------------ [img]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/4024/magic14.jpg[/img] Activate this card by tributing 1 Sea Serpent monster.Special summon 2 Sea Serpent Monster from your hand.Destroy them during the end phase. ----------------------------- [img]http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/6096/magic15.jpg[/img] Activate this card while your oponnent activate a monster,spell or trap card effect that target a face-up Sea Serpent monster on the field.Negate that effect,then during the end phase draw 1 card. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Then 2 Speed Spells Promo cards. ------------------------------------------------- [img]http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/5585/magic12m.jpg[/img] Activate this card by removing al speed counters you control(min.3).Special summon 1 Sea Serpent monster from your graveyard whose level is equal to the removed Speed Counters. ------------------------------------------------ [img]http://img807.imageshack.us/img807/107/magic11.jpg[/img] Activate this card while you control 6 or more Speed Counters.Remove all Speed Counters you control and special summon 1 Sea Serpent from your hand whose level is equal or less to the removed Counters. -------------------------END------------------------- PD:please tell me how i can design Booster Packs. Then sorry about the OCG but i'm not from USA or UK im from argentina,i don't speak english. This is my favourite type monster.So i make a booster pack without Archetypes and only cards for Sea Serpent monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted June 27, 2011 Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 Wont make a sense to correct the OCG in detail. And i dont really care about the OCG at all - Especially since this is your first set I got a different Problem with this Set. I dont see any ideas. Its just support Sea Serpent...Period! Prefer a concept .. a new idea. And this is kinda like ... Hmm lets see "Summon Serpent.....increase ATK..hmm allright..my Set is ready" You need a new idea. I appreciate the effort you invested in creating those cards..so you'll get a 6/10 ... youre a 1 star.. so 7/10 (Good Job compared to other newbies) Keep it going..try new ideas and you might become a great cardmaker good luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 27, 2011 Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 I agree with the above. This Set doesn't really have anything new. Some of the pics could be better. OCG needs work. You can't have a Counter-Spell card. I think Divine Seal's picture is a warped picture of the Seal of Orichalcos. Overall it needs some work. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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