Tydog1999 Posted June 27, 2011 Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 [img]http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/9137/436362.jpg[/img] Lore: This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: - Once, by Tributing 1 face-up monster you control, you can send 1 card from your opponent's hand to the Graveyard. If the card sent to the Graveyard was a Monster Card, inflict damage to your opponent equal to that monster's ATK. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase during a turn that you use this card's effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted June 27, 2011 Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 Wow, I am actually very impressed on this card somewhat, I guess I'll give you the review..... [b]OCG[/b]: There were quite a few flaws in the grammar, but I think you could fix them.... Here's my remake: "[i][b]Once, by Tributing 1 face-up monster you control, you can send 1 card from your opponent's hand to the Graveyard. If the card sent to the Graveyard was a Monster Card, inflict damage to your opponent equal to that monster's ATK. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase during a turn that you use this card's effect."[/b][/i] [b]Artwork[/b]: I absolutely love, love, love this picture. I would be grateful if you could send me the link so I could make this into a card of my own. <3 [b]Effect[/b]: I think the effect is a little generic, but I don't mind it, since Machine-Type monsters don't typically have an effect like this. Plus, it's well-balanced. [b]Creativity[/b]: I can't lie, I see cards like this on a day-to-day basis, but putting it on a Machine-Type monster was a little unexpected, and this card's Summoning Requirements are far different than what normal people would have put. [b]Overall Thought[/b]: With a little extra work put into this with the Grammar, this card would have been absolutely fantastical!!! I loved the card, and I can't wait to see more! Keep up the good work, very impressive, MyStiK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tydog1999 Posted June 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 Thanks and.... [size="7"][b]BUMP[/b][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fader Posted June 27, 2011 Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 Nice work! You don't see a 1 Star make good cards like this everyday...well honestly you don't see anybody make cards like this everyday. OCG: Some Incorrect Spelling here and there so...8/10 Creativity: A Synchro Gemini isn't common, but you nailed it...10/10 Usability: I could see decks using this, and a Generic Synchro, maybe a staple so...9.5/10 Overall:(Based on Average) 9.25/10 Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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newhat Posted June 28, 2011 Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 Make compelling bumps! I see uses for this card in Archetypes that tend to overload on Tuners and skimp on Material (T.G., for instance). Its Material requirements are the important part; I would always run Trishula instead of this if it weren't for the ability to use both Cyber Magician and Striker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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