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LORE:[/u][/b] When this card is Summoned, except set, then place it in face up Defense Position.(this cards position cannot be changed, only by a card effect.) If this card is placed in Attack position, then Place it in face up Defense position at the end phase of the turn. you can destroy up to 3 set cards on the field during your opponents turn. this card gains 500 Def points for each card destroyed by this cards effect until the end phase of the turn.


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[b][u]LORE:[/u][/b] When this card is Summoned you can Discard any number of cards to destroy the same number of face up cards on the field. This card gains 500 Atk for each card that was destroyed by its effect until the End Phase of the turn.

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[b][u]LORE:[/u][/b] "Ice Golem"+"Earth Golem"
When this card is Summoned, discard up to 5 cards in your hand and Destroy the same number of cards on the field. This card Loses 500 Atk for each time it battle's with 1 of your opponents mosters. If this card has 0 ATk points, destroy this card. You gain life points equal to the total ATK this card lost Before it is destroyed while face up on the field.
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I hope I did not change the effects while fixing.
[spoiler=Earth Golem Fix]When this card is Summoned, change it to Defense Position.This card battle position cannot be changed, except with a card effect. During you or your opponent's End Phase, if this card is in Attack Position change it to Defense Position. Then, you can destroy up to 3 Set cards on the field during your opponent's next turn. For each card destroyed this card gains 500 DEF until the End Phase.[/spoiler]
Set is different from summon. If this "During you or your opponent's End Phase, if this card is in Attack Position change it to Defense Position. Then, you can destroy up to 3 Set cards on the field during your opponent's next turn." is 1 effect and the first part is a condition, the effect would be balance. But if I did change the effect and each part is a Separate effect, then I think destroying 3 cards during each of your opponent's turns is overpowered.

[spoiler=Ice Golem Fix]When this card is Summoned, you can discard any number of cards to destroy the same number of face-up cards on the field. For each card destroyed this card gains 500 ATK until the End Phase.[/spoiler]
Nothing new, balance enough however discarding 6 cards will give this card more than 5000 ATK which should not be get this easy.

[spoiler=Forstbit Golem Fix]"Ice Golem" + "Earth Golem"
When this card is Summoned, discard up to 5 cards to destroy the same number of cards on the field. Each time this card battles an opponent's monster it loses 500 ATK. If this card has 0 ATK, destroy it. You gain Life Points equal to the total ATK this card lost while face-up on the field.[/spoiler]
This card can be easily summon you do not have to control these materials or even use them due to that this effect is overpowerd, add this "A Fusion Summon of this card can only be conducted with the above Fusion Material Monsters." or this "This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by removing from play the above cards you control. (You do not use "Polymerization").".
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