TheBigCheese Posted June 28, 2011 Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 Never have I spent so much time on a card before. I have drafted it and redrafted it several times, I have changed it effect constantly and I have been trying to make it powerful yet balanced. It’s been tough but I think I’ve finally cracked it. Zelda fan or not please tell me what you think, it would be so helpful. Here it is: [size="5"][font="Book Antiqua"][center][u][b]Dark One of Legend[/b][/u][/center][/font][/size] [center][img]http://img808.imageshack.us/img808/4369/347464.jpg[/img] The ATK of this card is equal to your Life Points. This card cannot attack on the first turn it is Special or Fusion Summoned. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. As long as you control this card, during your End Phase your opponent sends monsters they control to the Graveyard until the collective ATK of all monsters they control is equal to or less than the ATK of this card. If this card leaves the field, return it to your Extra Deck.[/center] Regards and thanks in advance........ TheBigCheese Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Strawberry Posted June 29, 2011 Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 The effect is on the verge of being OP'd. If someone was lucky enough to get this sucker out in their first couple turns, their opponent would have no defensive force since they would have to tribute their monsters from his effect. But most of the time it would be a while before you got him out so he passes. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigCheese Posted June 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 [quote name='SmileyOfChaos' timestamp='1309323353' post='5318894'] The effect is on the verge of being OP'd. If someone was lucky enough to get this sucker out in their first couple turns, their opponent would have no defensive force since they would have to tribute their monsters from his effect. But most of the time it would be a while before you got him out so he passes. 9/10. [/quote] Thanks for the review. However I believe that you have misread my card. It says that the total collective ATK of your opponent's monsters has to be [b]EQUAL[/b] or [b]LESS[/b] to the ATK of "Dark One of Legend" therefore if you got it out on your first turn your opponent wouldn't have to send monsters to the graveyard if the collective ATK of thier mosnsters did not exceed 8000. I hope you can see how I balanced it now lol Regards...... TheBigCheese Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Strawberry Posted June 29, 2011 Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 Ah. My bad lol...I change my rating to 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigCheese Posted June 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 [quote name='SmileyOfChaos' timestamp='1309344617' post='5319201'] Ah. My bad lol...I change my rating to 10/10. [/quote] No worries it's easy to misread something. Thanks again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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