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I think this is pretty realistic
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REALISTIC MY POOP-CHUTE!
1. Don't make your own sub-types.
2. Try to find pics with some background in them.
3. You're new so OCG can get a little leniency, but if you've seen just one card you know that card names are capitalized, even in the effect.
5. Everyone knows Yugioh cards don't contain run-on sentences.
4. Work on your grammar. "This card cannot be normal summon" just sounds stupid.
4. Death Warrior G is horribly overpowered. I rate a 1/10.
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[color="#FF0000"][/color] [b]Death Warrior R[/b]

The effect of this card is standard at best. A monster cannot be tribute summoned by sending a card, when you send a card, it's usually for Special Summon. If that's the cast, change the Tribute Summon for Special Summon. The image is dull and boring. I know Death can make a good warrior, but can it look more menacing? I don't know, there's a lot of pictures of Death on deviantart.com. Maybe you can a better one.

[b]Dark Blade[/b]
The image is very bad. Black and white pictures needs to be in color.When you say ''summon'' you have to specified what is the summon. (Special Summon, Normal Summon, Synchro Summon...) etc... The effect is useless seen that you can only (specified) summon 1 monster and it's Dark Warrior T.
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Dark Warrior K[/b]
As a lot of ATK, but as too many drawbacks which make him difficult to be Tribute Summon. Also ''a'' is equal to ''1'' in the YGO grammar. The image is better, but its still black and white and no background.

[b]Death Warrior G[/b]
See a Synchro monster to understand the function of Synchro. Also, 7500 effect damage? Too much reduce it or change it. Plus, it's hard to destroy a monster with that much ATK by battle, maybe by effect it would make more sense.

[b]Dark Warrior F[/b]
The card is useless. It has too much drawbacks, the effect is very weak for so many drawbacks. The image is better, but what does F stands for? I understand G=God, K=Knight and R=Reaper, so probably change the name.
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Dark Warrior T[/b]
The card doesn't an effect, what you put was a description. Change it for a Normal Card. The image has color, but what's ''Dark'' about a dwarf holding a beer? Nothing, really.

[b][u]Overall: 1.5/10[/u][/b]

BTW, you cannot made up types.
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