jojololo Posted June 30, 2011 Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 [img]http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/4046/68990.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hariken Posted June 30, 2011 Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 Well I love to see a new addition to the Fleur Archetype! But it's effect seems a bit to broken considering it's ATK is 3000, maybe lower it a bit, and you should add a lore below the card, I could barely read the effect. Oh and the sides of the picture that look like the sides of Black Rose Dragon should go, they make the picture look kinda awkward. Not a single OCG problem as far as I can tell, so good job there! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon7OP Posted June 30, 2011 Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 Good effect and OCG. The image is a little off, but the edges gone will fix that. The ATK is a bit high for it's effect, so drop that a bit. The biggest errors fall somewhat near nit-picking, as it is a preTty good card. Of course, I don't know much about the archetype, so I may not be the best one to suggest anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hariken Posted July 1, 2011 Report Share Posted July 1, 2011 [quote name='Dragon7OP' timestamp='1309400688' post='5321250'] Good effect and OCG. The image is a little off, but the edges gone will fix that. The ATK is a bit high for it's effect, so drop that a bit. The biggest errors fall somewhat near nit-picking, as it is a preTty good card. Of course, I don't know much about the archetype, so I may not be the best one to suggest anything. [/quote] There isn't much of an archetype, it's just a Synchro called Fluer de Chevalier and the Fluer Synchron required for this, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted July 1, 2011 Report Share Posted July 1, 2011 [quote name='Hariken' timestamp='1309496936' post='5324299'] There isn't much of an archetype, it's just a Synchro called Fluer de Chevalier and the Fluer Synchron required for this, [/quote] What about Sorcerice de Fleur and Necro Fleur... Anywho I love the card I think it should just be the lady and not the cropped out Black Rose that would be my only suggestion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hariken Posted July 1, 2011 Report Share Posted July 1, 2011 [quote name='Beginning446' timestamp='1309531845' post='5324983'] What about Sorcerice de Fleur and Necro Fleur... Anywho I love the card I think it should just be the lady and not the cropped out Black Rose that would be my only suggestion. [/quote] I don't really count those, it's the anime corrupting me, Necro and Sorcerice were used only when that character became evil so I pretend they don't exist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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