BFG Studios Posted July 1, 2011 Report Share Posted July 1, 2011 [color="#FF0000"][b]NOTE:[/b][/color] I [u]do not have the Xyz Card Template[/u] so I was forced to use the YCM to make all these cards... Just [u]focus on the effects, OCG, and anything else of importance[/u] to rate and tell me how [b]good/bad [/b]these cards are! [size="4"][b] [spoiler=Field Guiding Paragon] [img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/8263/390021b.jpg[/img] Lore: 2 Level 4 monsters If a monster you control is targeted for an attack: Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to negate the attack. If this card is targeted for an attack when it has no Xyz Materials: You can banish this card and negate the attack. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Natural Overtaking Spirit] [img]http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/2952/390021.jpg[/img] Lore: 2 Level 4 monsters This card gains the ATK of its Xyz Materials. If a Xyz Material is detached, the ATK of this card is decreased by the detached monster's ATK. If this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to inflict damage to your opponent equal to its DEF. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Powered Burning Dragon] [img]http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/2952/390021.jpg[/img] Lore: 2 Level 4 monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to inflict damage to your opponent equal to its ATK. If you use this effect: This card cannot declare an attack this turn. If you do not use this effect: You can attach 1 Level 4 monster from your hand or Graveyard to this card and it is treated as a Xyz Material. You can only attach the same card once. [/spoiler] [spoiler=BROKEN CARD!!!] [spoiler=Are you SURE you want to see it???] [spoiler=Sylph of Origination] [img]http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/6664/390021l.jpg[/img] Lore: 2 Level 4 monsters When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; destroy all monsters your opponent controls and inflict 800 damage to your opponent for each monster destroyed this way. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/b][/size] All artwork by JazinKay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2011 added a new card just now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2011 any1 like xyz's? plz rate and give feedback *bump* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Time Psyduck Posted July 2, 2011 Report Share Posted July 2, 2011 A general point: To date no Xyz monster has variable material number needs. All of them have a fixed monster number requirement, so not doing so doesn't help the realism. Paragon is basically Uutopia with 200 less ATK, less utility in it's effect and a slight improvement in what happens when the materials run out. Overtaking Spirit looks nice, although it's rather easy to abuse - 2 Gene-Warped Warwolfs give it 4000 ATK to start with, making the burn damage redundant. With the bigger level 4's with negative effects, this gets even higher. Maybe have the ATK gain from the materials a continuous effect, and rather than a burn just have removing one of the materials a cost of inflicting damage or something. Burning Dragon looks nice, but again the ATK values of some level 4's may prove problematic. It would probably be better as a Rank 2 with 1500-2000 ATK, to limit the burn from each monster. The ability to recharge it is nice, but makes the burn even more dangerous. The ATK could probably do with going down a little, since 2500 is high for Rank 4s. Sylph is broken. It has more ATK than any real Rank 4 and has a Raigeki effect, plus burn, at the cost of one Xyz material and your opponent having a monster with less than 2700 ATK/DEF. It should probably be Rank 6+, or at least require 3-4 monsters, and perhaps require the removal of two (or all) of it's material monsters for the effect (certainly it shouldn't get the effect more than twice if it does use more monsters). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2011 [quote name='Time Psyduck' timestamp='1309611626' post='5327807'] A general point: To date no Xyz monster has variable material number needs. All of them have a fixed monster number requirement, so not doing so doesn't help the realism. Paragon is basically Uutopia with 200 less ATK, less utility in it's effect and a slight improvement in what happens when the materials run out. Overtaking Spirit looks nice, although it's rather easy to abuse - 2 Gene-Warped Warwolfs give it 4000 ATK to start with, making the burn damage redundant. With the bigger level 4's with negative effects, this gets even higher. Maybe have the ATK gain from the materials a continuous effect, and rather than a burn just have removing one of the materials a cost of inflicting damage or something. Burning Dragon looks nice, but again the ATK values of some level 4's may prove problematic. It would probably be better as a Rank 2 with 1500-2000 ATK, to limit the burn from each monster. The ability to recharge it is nice, but makes the burn even more dangerous. The ATK could probably do with going down a little, since 2500 is high for Rank 4s. Sylph is broken. It has more ATK than any real Rank 4 and has a Raigeki effect, plus burn, at the cost of one Xyz material and your opponent having a monster with less than 2700 ATK/DEF. It should probably be Rank 6+, or at least require 3-4 monsters, and perhaps require the removal of two (or all) of it's material monsters for the effect (certainly it shouldn't get the effect more than twice if it does use more monsters). [/quote] thanks for all the feedback you have earned yourself a +rep for it all Anyway, i knew from the start that Xyz's have always had fixed numbers of monsters... i just felt like changing it up a little for their effects... but I'll look into changing them I knew Paragon would need some work, but at the time, and still now, I'm not exactly sure how to fix him... Glad you like Overtaking Spirit, but once i put that "gains ATK from it's Materials"... i immediately thought of 2 2000 ATK monsters. I was too lazy at the time, but maybe I'll change it to where if the Material's ATK is greater than a given number, it's ATK is halved. Glad you also like Burning Dragon... it was my first Xyz and I think my best. However, now that I look at it again, i feel that, yes, having the powerful 2500 ATK AND the effect of attacking your opponent could be broken... I'll keep it a Level 4, but lower the ATK Your simple point of "Sylph is broken" made me lol. It was my last Xyz to be made in this set of cards and i knew that something was wrong with the effect and stats. I tried to fix the fact that the ATK was high by the low DEF, but that doesn't matter since this is an Attacking card. My guess is that there is no real way to improve the effect without doing something major, so ... I was thinking about removing it from the list. Again thanks for the feedback and the chat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 omg... finally updated the cards!!! tell me what you think... I'll read anything you've got to say Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blue_eyes_ultimate Posted July 3, 2011 Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 I really like the cards! They could use some improving, Like "Powered Burning Dragon". Make the number of material monsters it needs a set number, like 2 or 3. But other than that, really good effects and art. I give them a 8.5/10. Good Job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2011 ok, they are updated... i felt that the Dragon's effect should be Set Number because the effect gets it more monsters anyway bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
infinitysqrd Posted July 6, 2011 Report Share Posted July 6, 2011 You're right Sylph of Origination is the most OP for only needing 2 Xyz material monsters, if you make it need 3 then it would be more balanced. Also what does BFG stand for? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2011 [quote name='infinitysqrd' timestamp='1309992852' post='5333126'] You're right Sylph of Origination is the most OP for only needing 2 Xyz material monsters, if you make it need 3 then it would be more balanced. Also what does BFG stand for? [/quote] yeah... i think i'll just delete Sylph because i dont feel like working with it anymore... Anyway, for your question... BFG stands for 1 of 2 things... The first one is inappropriate... just watch the movie "DOOM" to find out The second one is "Battle For Good", meaning if you perform an action, you'll have to have a good cause behind it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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